Review Detail of Amelion in GoT: Break the Wheel

I am curious which chapter you made it to? The first 25 chapters are a time skip showing all the changes I made to canon to lay the ground work for the next 1000 chapters or more. Cant grow a tree from nothing...

can't you at least focus on mc, because for me the first impression when reading this fanfic is not good, that's what makes me not want to continue reading it. this is my honest opinion

You must have never seen the show or the book this is based on, the entire point of this 'world' is the different POV's and seeing how the players in the 'game' play. Taking out other peoples POV is like taking out the magic of harry potter, it just does not make sense for the world. It focuses a lot more on the MC when the stage is set after chapter 25 but I don't recommend reading about a world that is designed to change POV if you don't like POV swapping...

Yo why are you reading this if you haven’t even read the books or seen the show

New 'reader' here at least I was for like 6 chapters. Most people won't read your story exactly because of this mess, the first 25 chapters as you said here is just a massive info dump nonsensical one at that (This killed most people's desire to read your story, me included).

That's fine :)

Bro, it is hardly fine If your storys early chapters are a turn off it doesn’t matter their purpose or how the story is later on as nobody will be willing to read up to that point

Its fine because I do not care, I write for people who can put up with my nonsense and no one else.