Reviews of Draft- RakhtaBhushan (Blood Ornament)

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An intriguing read, Review proper Writing quality. Superb! The author has great usage of words. The narratives especially the fight scenes are vivid. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable chapter release every day so far, based on what I see. Story Development. Slow and steady, which is good, since we could delve more into the details of the story. Character Design. For me, I got some mysterious vibes with the mls personalities. And which makes this interesting. The other characters were also quite developed and well crafted with the image the author wants to portray. World background. My respects for the author. As from her notes, there is one that she says that she wanted to draw a rich and colorful picture of her tradition and culture. And she certainly did. As a reader, I could see the hard work of the author she put to create the world for this story. Overall, great work indeed! Greatly recommended if you want something refreshing to read💞🙏

I don't know how far India has gone in LGBT rights, and I don't care. This novel uses a very well developed premise of gay love archetype, and puts it in a completely different situation. In this case, it is hindu mythos. I would love to see how Muni, Hrishi, Devas, Rakshashas play out on this naughty yet deep fantasy. Keep it up :D

Wow, I am in awe. This novel is very inspiring and I am very fond of reading this work. I gotta say I am impressed! No grammar mistakes for me so far and updating stability was consistent. The character development was slowly building up and the world-building was very vast. This novel is the kind that I need to learn from, I took a liking to this work and at the same time, learn from it. Kudos and Peace! ✌️

DESERVES A FIVE STAR!!!!! I should have read this sooner for this is great, I enjoyed it so much. I'm very fond of this book. I was took hook reading this and I even forgot to do my assignments. I enjoyed this a lot, no joke. Your writing and imagination skills is superb. I love the world back ground, your narration and everything. Definitely adding this masterpiece to my library and finish this! Keep writing author!

Nice story! It reminds me of Ramayan. But the plot is completely different. And the story is different but great too! Like the synopsis too. 😊 Keep it up with your great thought and great writing skill!

SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p‎ ‏‏‎ and I'm not even into bl‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎

Dudeeeee this is awesomeee kyaaaaaa XD You need to teach me your ways of detailing events and backgrounddd senpaiiii ;; u ;; /// First thing's first, the writing. Absolutelyyy top-notch! Me like how everything is so well-described and in such poetic ways too! :D Everything was so vividly described that I could imagine the events playing out in my head-- and psst ofc the hot dudes too HOHOHO I learned lots of new words by reading this lol ngl, author you have a wiiiide range of vocabularyyyy :D I also like the characters and how they each have their own charms! :D Anddd me like reading how they interact with each other, particularly surya and indra hueheheheheh, AND OF COURSEE HIS RIVAL YAS I mean, lots of hot bois? mmhmm, instant win for me :3 I like how it started with a lil bit of flashback instead of info dumping, and how the author incorporated Hindu stories! :D me love reading the author's note and learning about it lol educate me/// The time skip from when he was a baby to his ***** version was kinda confusing to me, but it okei! i got to read cool fighting scenes hehe! and the faster we see hot bois, the better! :3 Great work, authorrrr <3

Well written and vivid descriptions of all characters and scenes. The author clearly put in the time to craft a quality piece of writing. Great Job!

Wonderful book, glad that I read it! Loved the start, the flawless words, and the vocabulary. I like the Indian touch in the book. I quite like the entire book, so far... I hope you continue with your work and all the best to you[img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's a good book so far. Writing Quality: Your writing quality is superb. I can't seem to find any mistakes, which is good. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: The story at the beginning jumps a little bit, so I got a little confused. In the prologue, you put 200 years before main story, and then it jumped to when the main character was born, then jumped again to when the main character was ??? age? If you're going to put 200 years before main story, I feel you need to be consistant, and say when the main story starts, and at what age the main character is... All I'm saying is I'd like it if you say how long each time skip is to the previous chapter. Character Design: Nothing to say here. World Background: Nothing to say here.

I looove ur story! The plot is really interesting and i see that ur book has loads of potential! Thing is, i dont like this genre but ur book is something I can't miss! Consider me a fan :D I also adore the characters and can't wait to see what holds for them in the future!

Very interesting book. I love how you base your story on mythology, but you make it your own story. The detail and world-building is amazing. The language you use works well with the kind of story you're telling. I've completely caught up, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my goodness I am absolutely in love with this book. The description is so good I genuinely want to cry. How the author manages to create something so poetic, so enticing while simultaneously upholding the mystical enchantment of a magical world is beyond me. I love the characters, the little insights into their thoughts, the tactful perspective and time shifts. Its all really artfully put together, and I love how the author lends enough time in the book for world building too. Everything builds up at such a satisfying rate, yet there is enough tension and mysteries to leave you wanting more and more. Author, I take my hat off to you. This book is truely amazing

Wow. Wow wowowowow This novel is amazing. Author wrote in a flow that worked so well and though there are many characters, Author was kind enough to add a Character List in beginning! I love the prologue and the characters interaction. I am interested in learning more about them all. Well done author! Adding to my library! If you are still wondering if you should read this, DO IT!

Brooooooo! What a read! Author-san your book is crazy. The story is very captivating. everything is well detailed and described. The characters are very rich and colorful. everything from their behavior and attitude is wonderful. The author Knows how to properlu set a Wonderful Tone and pace to the story. Adding just enough tension to keep the reader entranced. Please check it out if you have not!!! Kuddos Author, this is staying in my collection.

I've always wanted to read a fantasy set other than medieval Europe. The language is exquisite and fits perfectly the story it's telling. This is one of the very few books that gives WN hope. Adding this to my library.

Wow...just wow... As I am writing a story derived from mythology, too. Reading a different myth is just amazing, refreshing. This is the first time that I have read a Hindu Myth. This got me curious. (aside from it being BL) Gambare, Author~

Hi, dear readers! Thank you so much for checking out my story! [img=recommend] I would love to hear from you. Please leave any comments or feedback. And if you are ready, please feel free to write a review or give this story a rating. I truly hope you enjoy my work! Thank you, again! [img=update] P.S. I will just go ahead and give my story a 5-star rating cuz why not. [img=recommend]