I love reading books, particularly the ancient type books with female leads, alchemy and so much more
They're short and to the point, yet deep. I really like them. There's not much I can say about it because there are not enough chapters. They're not long enough to have any serious issues with the spelling and grammar.
Came and gone? It doesn't sound right... shouldn't it be came and went?
I don't read or write poetry. Even in school, I never really understood the subject. I can say this though. Although there are some dark pieces, it's an interesting compilation. It has something for everyone, so just enjoy.
Although I couldn't understand why you did it, doesn't mean I didn't like it. As a Christian, it's nice to see someone using the Bible in such a way.
Comma after soil.
Full stop after Kathleen. Get rid of didn't. Comma after everything.
Question mark after first.
"But dear, Lucy... she can't..."
Lower case n for night. Comma after April, and lower case h for her.
You need to rewrite this sentence. It doesn't sound right.
Comma after speaking.
Full stop after follow, and get rid of so. Finally rather than then.
Full stop after all rather than a comma.
Comma after further.
Comma after father.
"for the both of them." Comma after straight.
Of rather than from. Semi-colon rather than comma after shrine.
Full stop after warm.
Full stop after job.
Full stop after response. "Her mind was racing, and..." Comma after her.