Review Detail of mozza_mello in Draft- RakhtaBhushan (Blood Ornament)

Dudeeeee this is awesomeee kyaaaaaa XD You need to teach me your ways of detailing events and backgrounddd senpaiiii ;; u ;; /// First thing's first, the writing. Absolutelyyy top-notch! Me like how everything is so well-described and in such poetic ways too! :D Everything was so vividly described that I could imagine the events playing out in my head-- and psst ofc the hot dudes too HOHOHO I learned lots of new words by reading this lol ngl, author you have a wiiiide range of vocabularyyyy :D I also like the characters and how they each have their own charms! :D Anddd me like reading how they interact with each other, particularly surya and indra hueheheheheh, AND OF COURSEE HIS RIVAL YAS I mean, lots of hot bois? mmhmm, instant win for me :3 I like how it started with a lil bit of flashback instead of info dumping, and how the author incorporated Hindu stories! :D me love reading the author's note and learning about it lol educate me/// The time skip from when he was a baby to his ***** version was kinda confusing to me, but it okei! i got to read cool fighting scenes hehe! and the faster we see hot bois, the better! :3 Great work, authorrrr <3