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Oh, right, I never got to change their titles, thanks for this.
Thank you so much for this review. I mainly do everything on laptop. I'll fix the things you advise. Greatly appreciated all of this. Also if you're interested, We have a discord server for writers, and I would love to invite you there. If you're interested you could join through this link: https://discord.gg/x8bt2zGf We would be honored to have you there.
This book is such an Exquisite Read. Review Proper, after reading the latest chapter 27 release. Writing quality. The narratives are clear and easy to read. Has vivid details of everything that is happening. Stability of update. The author has a regular update per week. Story Development. Slow but steady and I don't mind since the development of the story is greatly explained and just felt right. The leads started with attraction, then the long hot scenes. In the later chapters, the story started to progress with some hint drops of their background stories. Character Design. The female lead, Cassandra, and male lead Julian have both similar at the same time different persona that matched them well. The other characters, her daughter, her friends, and the others have justified personas as well on making the story more engaging. World Background. From the business firms, family names, and the country. They all make sense and detailed. Overall, the author do a well done work for this story. Greatly recommended! Great work author!
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Thank you so much for this insightful review. Greatly appreciated. We have a discord server for writers, and I would love to invite you there. If you're interested you could join through this link: https://discord.gg/x8bt2zGf We would be honored to have you there.
This is one of my all time favorites since back at Wattpad. And just found out that this is now on WN╥﹏╥ Writing quality. The narrative are clear and some are cutting edge. I also felt so many feels within most of the lines. Story Development. Very mesmerizing and breathtaking. Unlike other system and transmigration stories this one has a unique vibe due to the personality Luna have. Character Design. They say that when the readers truly feel every bit of the character's emotions, struggles and joy. Then it is already a wonderful book. And this one has it. As the chapters increases the chapters and she went to different story lifetimes, I could truly feel her growth. I cheer for her, I even sometimes cry for and sometime kept me hold my breath for some predicaments she experience. For the other characters, oh boy, Baobao is adorable. And the second male leads she was partner with. Ah, I have to many heartbreaks for them in each time they leave them. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable update release. World Background. Everything is written well, with clear imagery on the different world she crossed to. Overall, if anyone reads this review, I greatly recommended this book to you! And I would ascertain you that you will never be disappointed. Great Work author! This book truly deserves a perfect 5 rating!
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Thank you, I'll fix this base on your suggestion, greatly appreciated.
An intriguing read, Review proper Writing quality. Superb! The author has great usage of words. The narratives especially the fight scenes are vivid. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable chapter release every day so far, based on what I see. Story Development. Slow and steady, which is good, since we could delve more into the details of the story. Character Design. For me, I got some mysterious vibes with the mls personalities. And which makes this interesting. The other characters were also quite developed and well crafted with the image the author wants to portray. World background. My respects for the author. As from her notes, there is one that she says that she wanted to draw a rich and colorful picture of her tradition and culture. And she certainly did. As a reader, I could see the hard work of the author she put to create the world for this story. Overall, great work indeed! Greatly recommended if you want something refreshing to read💞🙏