Write_D_Words
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
The story is quite interesting, but you cant miss even a single paragraph because the story is taking new turn, in each paragh. The story is great, but characters are not well defined, world background is extraordinary, and fun to read something new! Updates are slow but we can understand. Overall amazing story, I hope it will get more interesting in future.
This is on point! Now, the book isn't choppy and use descriptive details to explain the plot. I could tell what was going on like the banishing of Alexander. Now I would say, I feel like the world background could be a bit defined, because at some times I forget where certain things are happening. Nonetheless, masterpiece.
The book cover (and the lighting for "Dark Light Nights" the red thingy) looks so awesome! I really love that and the concept of the story! The first few chapters are very captivating! The only thing that I'd like to point out the "Show, not tell" technique. There are few incomplete sentences from here and there. I am sure that once those were fixed, this novel will stand top on the mountains of books in Webnovel! Kudos for the author! (by the way, the sword reminded me of Star Wars. It looks so perfect and amazing!)
Have been reading around 10 chapters. At first, I thought this novel would be the classic light vs dark theme, but there seems more to it when you read more chapters. There are a lot of unique character with their own quirk. Ciana one of the most interesting, I think. The story progress in slow pace, not exactly my cup of tea but still bearable overall it's a good read!
Intriguing Story! I can’t see anything wrong with this novel. It is easy to understand, the flow is amazing, the author surprises you in many ways, it has a good concept and the dialogues. Any reader will get caught up from the very start, the prologue of the work. MCs character designing, abilities, and the world-building of this work are definitely top-notch. In the end, I can only say Good work author, keep updating, it is in my collection now. As for all the readers out there, please give this work a try.