ReginaldDabs
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I think "nerf" should be capitalized here (to "Nerf") since it's the name of a brand, right? Or, since "Nerf" is an acronym (Non-Expanding Recreational Foam) it could also be in all-caps? (to "NERF")
Indeed :')
Thank you! I've tried editing the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs, and it seems to work when I view it on the computer website, but when I view it on the mobile app it doesn't seem like anything's changed. Once I get that figured out then those big ugly paragraphs should be split up much more nicely!
it puts it there for you already, so it ends up saying "Chapter 1: Chapter 1: ..."
fyi you should probably change your chapter title here. you don't have to put "chapter 1" in the beginning
Really great novel. The beginning is captivating and has a whole lot of great mystery. Also, it's written in first person, which I personally love! It's very dark but it isn't "edgy" or whatever. Everyone feels like real people and not just random characters meant to serve a purpose. Also, the grammar/prose is great! Definitely recommend.