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TheSuccessor

TheSuccessor

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I'm a person who likes writing and is a hobby of mine. I hope to become a famous author and I want to start it here. I have written four books and is looking forward to the fifth.

2020-08-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor6mth
    Posted

    I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor6mth
    Posted

    I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

    altalt
    Heatherland.
    Eastern · GMS Jakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor6mth
    Posted

    I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor7mth
    Posted

    This story is nothing short of entertaining. It has some nice flow and progression. Good writing. Good development. And the world background is also present.

    altalt
    Lord of Business
    Urban · LordShivaStories
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor7mth
    Posted

    One of the strengths of first-person stories is that it really helps make the main character shine because of it. We get to see them develop and to grow along in the story. This is one I'm excited for.

    altalt
    I am Hera
    Fantasy · ariam_N_M
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor8mth
    Commented

    Here's what you should do. If you can't figure out the others, just try to do the ones you know. For example, if you don't know what the rising action is, then just do your beginning. Write that beginning and soon enough, your brain will garner more ideas that will eventually lead to your rising action.

    Ch 5 Story Plot
    altalt
    How to Write An Action-Packed Book
    Urban · TheSuccessor
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor10mth
    Posted

    This book is quite good in my opinion. I love the way the author makes the MC so narcissistic in a way.

    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor10mth
    Posted

    Something about new worlds being created just makes me excited to see the immersive world that is being introduced to me. It's very exciting, very interesting, and very intriguing.

    altalt
    Story No Longer Exists
    Fantasy · OldNispy
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor10mth
    Replied to Kara_wish_writes

    RIP for them; wish them luck though.

    I got to my locker 426, and I opened my locker. I saw that all my books were still there, and I sighed with relief. Sometimes some people know other people's codes, like Kirk, and they snatch my books for fun, as if it's just a normal thing to do to a normal person.
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    "I'll be fine being alone in prom," I said, sighing. "It's not like I care anyways. We can always come back home, play video games, pretend I didn't waste my hours on something useless."
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    I guess they're not much of an emergency if they keep happening every time.
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    Just to tell you about my life: I'm a sophomore, so I've been here for at least a year. We moved from Utah to California because my dad got a new job as a cameraman for Hollywood. We would probably live in a better house, but my dad was very skeptical about the amount of money needed to pay the bills and all the stuff I care less to think about.
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    Today was a day that I most hated, the day of prom. Days and weeks and months of little snippets about the prom annoyed me already. But the day when it is, it's the only thing trending in Wolfpack School. People would rush up to me as if I give a care in the world asking: Do you have someone for prom?
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    I'm a boy who just despises the presence of other people that seem to be all over not only my physical body, but my mental brain. The feeling of awkwardness drowns me, and it almost puts me in a bad mood. But that doesn't mean I'm some type of person who finds pleasure in being alone with no one to love you, or to care even about you.
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Commented

    Mhm, I see ya

    Do you ever get any of those times where you feel as if the world is against what you do, how you do—almost your entire being? The world is planning and surveying each way your life could just turn in the opposite direction of how you wanted and how you expected things to be.
    altalt
    Spy Mage System
    Fantasy · GMSJakers
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Posted

    I like how fast-paced the story is, with exceptional writing, good storyline, and a very nice depiciton of certain characters. Very nice job in this book.

    altalt
    Conqueror of Magic
    Fantasy · AMonarch
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Posted

    The development of each character is finely done, supported with a good plot, good writing, and advanced storytelling. However, the paragraphs are a bit too long for my liking, but that's just my opinion. Nonetheless, good book.

    altalt
    Altea: World of Magic
    Fantasy · kamil3791
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Posted

    Pretty cool story, not gonna lie. The world building of the story is on point, and the plot is structured and very intriguing. Great job on this book.

    altalt
    Warrior Of Gaia
    Fantasy · BigSeb
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Posted

    This is a very unique storyline, but its quite interesting, not gonna lie. The description of the character is very nicely done.

    altalt
    The Fantastic Five.
    Teen · Prajnya Shriyan
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  • TheSuccessor
    TheSuccessor1yr
    Posted

    The book is good in terms of having a fun time when reading this book. The chapters are very interesting to read, and very captivating by its use of words.

    altalt
    大丈夫
    Fantasy · Ueko_Ahsaka
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