Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Dark Light Nights

The book cover (and the lighting for "Dark Light Nights" the red thingy) looks so awesome! I really love that and the concept of the story! The first few chapters are very captivating! The only thing that I'd like to point out the "Show, not tell" technique. There are few incomplete sentences from here and there. I am sure that once those were fixed, this novel will stand top on the mountains of books in Webnovel! Kudos for the author! (by the way, the sword reminded me of Star Wars. It looks so perfect and amazing!)