Eggy_does_writing
Nice setting and characters. It reminds me of a fantasy Mulan a bit. You can tell the author takes time thinking, planning, writing and editing. This is an author who cares about the details. If you want to read a proper story and not just the haphazard junk food which is most of WN, give this a try!
Wonderfully interesting novel! The synopsis and the first few chapters have me hooked. The length of your chapter is just right and your writing quality is great. The only thing that bothered me is some of the dialogue that uses this asterisk (*) instead of quotation marks ("). Overall your story is unique and intriguing so keep up the good work!
I believe this story to be written with a lot of love and I would recommend this book to everyone. The initial character development and descriptions make the world feel more lived in and the characters more life like. I like the mixture between Victorian and Medieval Aesthetics for the world, however at first it is difficult to get a sense of what the world is like with the introduction sequence. As well, the intro is a bit difficult to follow with all of the character introductions. Overall though, the story really picks up after the intro and I would have to recommend this book!
This one breaks through the usual approaches to creating a fantasy novel. Writing - definitely good, author has excellent grammar and execution of words to narrate the story Updates - hopefully, will be stable and continuous. Since this is new, I can't really judge it yet. Development - another great thing about this book. I like how the story goes so far, not so fast, and not to slow either. Characters - vivid designs, very descriptive and lively World background - A+ right off the bat
Very intriguing. The whole plot got me hook and just reading the initial chapter, I'm already enthralled with the idea of the girl playing the role of a boy. It makes one wonder what happens next and continues to read through. I highly recommend :D This a really good read :D Keep up the great work author-nim :D
That is a good ride Kudos for the author for writing such an intriguing story. I highly recommend everyone to give this story a try, just read the first chapter and you can see that this story has quality. The author is surely done it this time I like how the author use * to differentiate what is on their mind and what word is coming from their mouth, the pacing is nice and the conversation flow pleasingly. Thus, make the storytelling overall better than the other mediocre Keep up the good work author, keep up writing ^^
I like stories that take place in the past, especially fantasy stories, but this didn't feel right. This reminded me of Legend of Korra where there's electricity in the same place where there's magic. What's the point in having magic if there's technology? The story pacing is too fast and jumps around too much but I just don't understand the world building