ssun_ara
Honestly, I frequently reading Manga's than novel, so there is a lot more conversation than narrative in my writings. Hope you like it! Ig account promote: @ssun_ara
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I can see this story is giving a kind of mystery like a scattered puzzle that eventually readers need to find the exact place and that is how you write a mystery! The author has done a great job. Grammatical errors are fine as long as it's understandable for the story. I've done a lot too and learned from that experience. I hope you keep updated on this novel and reached the top! *added to fav
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Okay, I'll work on this. Thank you so much for the feedback
fyi, I really liked a story with a Japanese background. The characteristic of the event and even the character are explained really well. It was a necessary move for a novel that required readers to imagine. I think this story will hit a lot of readers and I've gladly added it to my collection. I look forward to the story updates. Please update more <3
This novel really had great potential. I am also an author and this is a bit familiar with the story I recently worked on but this story had more conflict and intensity. Which is very good and interesting. I can easily imagine the conflict through the writing which is very helpful for me who is a fast reader. Keep up the good work!
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Honestly, I've 5 chapters of this novel and I thought this story has a good plot. I can see the author done a lot of research and more importantly is this story reflecting a few points that happen in real life. I always thought that story that requires research is difficult and I probably never gonna make that, If I were maybe it's not that good tho. But, once again this is great. Oh, I love the book cover. Veeeeeryy much!. as for the synopsis, It was a good one but I think you can work on it and make it more interesting for those who haven't read your book. Oh, and please kindly check out my novel, Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy. Thank you! -love
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Wah, bagus banget cerita ini, aku jadi inget, "Apapun yang kita rencana kan gak semuanya selalu terjadi dan bisa aja itu jadi hal yang enggak terduga buat kita". Cerita ini mengingatkan aku soal hal itu dan memang itu benar. Ada perjuangan juga di setiap jalan yang kita pilih, itulah hal yang dilakukan oleh ML di cerita ini.