Wonderfully interesting novel! The synopsis and the first few chapters have me hooked. The length of your chapter is just right and your writing quality is great. The only thing that bothered me is some of the dialogue that uses this asterisk (*) instead of quotation marks ("). Overall your story is unique and intriguing so keep up the good work!
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