Putting my wild imagination to good use😁 I truly love my characters and their worlds. I believe that if you give them a chance, you’ll love them, too. SaraWilcoxFanPage~FB Sara_Wilcox#5259~Discord
Welcome❤️ I’ll have your forum review ready on Wednesday. Sorry it’s taking so long😅 Personal issue… Also you can delete this😁 And the others if you like
I promise it will make sense later😁
Sara from forum- I would switch out ‘throbbed’, I would use ‘flailed’ or ‘thrashed’(again, just a suggestion❤️)
Sara from forum- Good first paragraph. I suggest switching ‘relief’ with reinforcements(just a suggestion tho😊)
The story is very original, and the world layout is very thorough. The character details are very well thought out. There are quite a few punctuation errors, but the story plot is solid, and I believe it has a lot of potential. Keep up the work Author! You are definitely staying on my WSA Potentials List❤️
About what happened to his family?