Crazy_Beast
So, Beast here. I am posting a newer review of this story. The grammar may be wonky, and I am trying to fix it, but I need time. Daily updates, but can't say it for sure. I might miss one or two. Story is too fast-paced, I know it. I am fixing it. A ton of info dumps. I am working on it, to make it more appealing. Ton of World Background packed into a very few chapters. I am rewriting the damned thing again. So, please bear with it.
I enjoyed what I have read so far. The writing is clean and grammatically sound. I would like to see a bit more description in the beginning chapter. I want to feel like I'm standing right there with the MC as he is entering the video game. Overall, good writing and a neat premise. Keep up the good work.
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It's the author supporting his own book. I will be honest to review it. Why you should read this? Our MC is a creator of Oasis, a VRMMORPG. He is reincarnated kinda into Oasis. The story is good and interesting while Glitch is OP but surely fails many times. His failures make him OP. The updates are frequent, 1 chapter per day. Grammar may be a bit rusty, I still lack it. The world-building is great too as Oasis has a sheer amount of places with an intertwined history.
It's a pretty interesting story! I haven't read a lot of LITRPGs, but this one has definitely peaked my interest! One thing that was confusing was discerning thought from speech, but only at first. You put the MC mumbling in single quotations, so I was under the impression that speech was in single quotations and was very confused when characters actually did begin to speak. But that is my only complaint! Other than that, well done.
Even though this is not my cup of tea novel, I can say that its well written and one of the better ones here on webnovel, the grammar is good for a original novel and I can say that it would do well after its discovered. Any other comments on the novel? Well I read only two chapters before I stopped because I don't really like the genre buttt It looks good for the ones who enjoy this type of novel, I would recommend you to read it.