It's a pretty interesting story! I haven't read a lot of LITRPGs, but this one has definitely peaked my interest! One thing that was confusing was discerning thought from speech, but only at first. You put the MC mumbling in single quotations, so I was under the impression that speech was in single quotations and was very confused when characters actually did begin to speak. But that is my only complaint! Other than that, well done.
Crazy_Beast
Liked it!
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