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ayaneisme
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It's a pretty interesting story! I haven't read a lot of LITRPGs, but this one has definitely peaked my interest! One thing that was confusing was discerning thought from speech, but only at first. You put the MC mumbling in single quotations, so I was under the impression that speech was in single quotations and was very confused when characters actually did begin to speak. But that is my only complaint! Other than that, well done.

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Prince of Heaven and Hell

Crazy_Beast

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Crazy_Beast
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I apologise for it. But like I said, I dumped too much info in the previous version. Those are MC's . He is talking to himself. Thank you for reading