wouldnt i be praising ur novel then? u really are a retard on top of being a cuck arent you

what? dont upload ur story here then :), u share your story, then people are going to have opinions about it. perhaps join a group of cucks, maybe theyll only have good things to say about it

He literally pointed it out in his comment retard

bro u write so many 'I's in a sentence, don't do it

author lost some braincells during the hiatus

whats the mc doing? this fic seems like a reaction video or something

you must be an edgy kid in real life

dude how many times are you going to mention that priscilla is similar to gilgamesh? Its not an assignment for an essay where you have to fill the word count. Do not repeat the same thing over and over. Dont repeat how arrogant gilgamesh is over and over again

some birds eat the fish tho

if you can be lazy on top of being trash you could also write this.

the chapters are too short :(

why tf was he given a golden mark by a random person for no reason?

i'll just wait for the next chapter then :(

he can steal his own unlocked ability or something? idk

why did he kill himself?

is that from suicide hunter? nice :)

cant wait for moar, the chapter ends too quickly :(

He and Him = Male She and Her = Female you seem to get confused in this alot. The story is good btw :)

the chapters are a bit too short :(

levelling up is not that easy in danmachi.