I'm unsure of what you mean by describing my MC. Personality? Appearance? Ideals? Regarding romance, at the moment, there is no big female lead that has been planned to be introduced. The novel will never have romance as a truly big, time-consuming thing, and I doubt that will change as I continue to write this.

Hey Readers! The author here. I just wanted to get a few things out of the way. First, the book will probably start slower than some of the other novels on this website but trust in the plot development. Also, another thing to note is that I am a college student who does this for fun and enjoyment, so please be gentle with this poor author if any unexpected circumstances arise. As for questions regarding romance or harem, I will probably not focus on romance. If it somehow does make it into the book, it'll probably be a minor thing that isn't a main focal point and most likely not a harem. This is my current direction though I guess things can always change depending on how the story evolves. Please give this poor, small author some support or a nice review if you enjoyed the book and enjoy a nice picture from one of my favorite mangas. Author out.

Honestly, the readability is top-notch and very fluid. The writing seems good, and the comedic/humorous moments are there. I am leaving a 4.8 for this review only because it seems that the chapters are not always daily. Nonetheless, this deserves a read! Recommended!

A great book with excellent writing quality. The author seems to know where he is going with this as the worldbuilding seems thought out. Definitely recommend!

A great book with great ideas. I loved the spiderman 2099 reference, as well as other things that make this story a very enjoyable read. I think this is definitely a good novel to check out and read. Leaving a 4.8 here with great expectations.

Everything looks great. The writing quality is very high and readable. The characters seem developed and have a great amount of depth to them, and the fact action paced fight in chapter 1 was enjoyable. Leaving a 4.8 with great expectations for this novel.

Like all my other reviews, let's talk about readability. I think this is definitely on this site's upper echelon of readability. I didn't really notice any grammar errors if there were, as it was quite fluid. This is definitely a good read!

Not my type of genre, but the book seems well thought out and well written that you would have no problem readability wise! Recommend to at least give it a read!

First things off, the Readability in the first chapter is a bit shaky, but it appears to get better chapter by chapter, which is good. There are a few grammatical mistakes or sentences that make sense but are missing or word or two, but honestly, nothing too big compared to some other novels I've seen. It seems the stability of updates hasn't been completely solid but still good enough. The story is very compelling however and can induce emotions out of the reader. All in all a good read!

I think the "I never liked around" part is missing the "I never liked to be around".

Like every review I do, I start with readability. This book has nice grammar and rather fluid readability to it, which is a very big plus. There are the occasional prose or grammatical error but in all honesty, they will get lost or won't be even apparent unless you are really looking for them, which you probably won't in a first read. Obviously, another big pro for me is the updated stability. All in all its a great book. Give it a read!

It's tough for me to really give an effective review as I don't naturally read FL often or at all. Some of the things I can comment on are that I think the writing itself is very fluid and natural and doesn't break my immersion at all. The English and grammar alike are very solid. If I had to change something writing-wise, it would be some of the longer paragraphs. I understand that sometimes a longer paragraph can be necessary, but some of them could always be broken into two or even more separate pieces. Stability looks solid from what I've seen so far. Loving the story and everything. Check this one out!

Haha, I also enjoy comments like these as it lets me think more in-depth about my story. Thanks for reading!

That's a valid point to make, but what I was trying to convey is her motivation as a mother to want to protect her son. Humans are not rational all the time and even more so for a mother regarding the safety of her son. That's why parents don't always make the best decisions or rational ones when the children they love so much are being affected. Even though Raz technically didn't get injured. He was in danger for a moment that required William to use his trump card. It's like how people would do more damage than good if it meant protecting their family. Even the most saintly people would do things not befitting to their personality for their children that's just human nature and how people were biologically wired. It's why people naturally find crimes and violence against children more horrifying than violence against adults. I was just trying to convey that point in a more playful and comedic sense. Although, your opinion is very much valid.

I mean she might not know everything as at the moment she only knows whatever Ed has told her, which is presumably something about Raz being in danger. Plus as a mortal, it's mentioned she can't really do serious damage to her husband and is merely doing this to make sure he doesn't put Raz in danger again.

I'll try my best. I had a lot of exams and coursework recently so I could not update more, but I'll try.

Good catch.

I don't normally read romance stories, but this one was definitely an interesting one. I think the writing quality is great and the potential is there. Be sure to read it!

John Dover's books are always interesting and intriguing. This one is no different be sure to check it out and give it a read, already love it.

As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!