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desdodo8mthCommented"but then next second everything..." maybe you meant but then the* next second. lol ok sorry I'll stop correcting! I recommend using something like grammarly, it's free and will fix these little errors that can ruin the immersion for some. Love the story so far though! even if it took a while to get into it!
I could feel all the different emotions hit me like a tidal wave but then next second everything became calm , serene and peaceful once again.- desdodo8mthCommented
"I chances I've missed" maybe you meant the* chances I've missed?
I could feel myself reliving everything that I've gone through in my life - the memories that I cherished , the friends I made , the people that I loved , and people I've lost , the mistakes I made , the choices I regret , I chances I missed - everything was in front of my eyes. - desdodo1yrCommented
Ummmmm, how is this honest, isn't this a lie, didn't the government send signals over the radio for survivors but his group is going to infiltrate it first to make sure its safe, I understand that he won't give away his power but what do you mean he's decided to be honest with her?
"The central government has not contacted anyone nor have they sent signals of any kind. The country's military forces probably collapsed or are in a big trouble since even after more than half a month there is still no trace of them either... The sooner you accept that the old society no longer exists the better it will be for you as many things will be simpler that way." - desdodo1yrCommented
Its almost 5 am for me, yet here I am reading this instead of going to sleep.
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"Oh, alright." - desdodo1yrCommented
Yandere??? Feels bad for the women though, when you think about it thats hella cruel.
[Craving Touch: Your touch will make a woman crave for more and she will never be sexually satisfied by anyone else. The more time you spend with a woman the stronger the effect gets.] - desdodo1yrReplied to DaoistW40miC
As soon as I find time :(, I thought I'd have free time this summer but I needed to get a job to fund me and my friends trip to France. So now with work and still enjoying the summer, I have very little time to write. Since it's only a hobby, I don't prioritize it so maybe come back in a few months and read the few chapters by that time. Sorry :(
Ch 19 Another Princess!? - desdodo1yrReplied to Bryan_KrossCh 14 Child of Shadows
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guess you'll just have to see and find out. :)
Sophia didn't speak very much, she mainly stared at me, and her eyes only seemed to bore even deeper into me whenever I spoke, it was a bit creepy, at first I thought that this was very similar to Nura or Adrianna, but I told myself it was impossible for every girl to be as crazy as them. - desdodo1yrReplied to Lucien1
lol, fantasy and reincarnation at its finest, a one-year-old probably wouldn't understand what the teacher was even implying, they might just cry at the tone of voice or stay ignorant.
"Are you sure you want to do this? Is this all it takes to break your spirit. Are you this weak." - desdodo1yrReplied to DaoistW40miC
The town is just a cover for the auction, however, most of the residents don't know about its existence. Only nobles would have enough money to even own platinum coins let alone spend them. Helen is missing, that's all I'll say, however after the incident her only concern was escaping even if she found our MC impeccably attractive she still valued her own life more due to only having a few short interactions with the MC, shes far more normal than the queen or Layla. Atleast for now :)
Ch 18 Breakout - desdodo1yrReplied to M0N3Ky_D3G3NER4TE
Lol every character in this book is crazy
Alison leaned back, a knee draped over the other—and before the door was fully closed, as if tempting fate that Jasmine would somehow hear her—she muttered in a sing-song tone, "Eeny, Meeny, Miny, Moe... catch the disobedient girl by the toe, if she hollers don't let her go..." she burst into peals of giggles, her hand tip-toeing down her navel, ever so southward, past the bindings of her pants. She bit her lip, "Oh, Jaz..." - desdodo1yrReplied to Nneeil
YES! YANDERE HAREM 4 LIFE!!
Alison leaned back, a knee draped over the other—and before the door was fully closed, as if tempting fate that Jasmine would somehow hear her—she muttered in a sing-song tone, "Eeny, Meeny, Miny, Moe... catch the disobedient girl by the toe, if she hollers don't let her go..." she burst into peals of giggles, her hand tip-toeing down her navel, ever so southward, past the bindings of her pants. She bit her lip, "Oh, Jaz..." - desdodo1yrReplied to Bob_7911
same here
"Excuse me, has the bus to Eastford Avenue already passed?" a strong rush of that familiar odor slammed on his face with all the subtlety of an elephant in a whorehouse. His nose twitched in reaction, prompting him to shoot a glare at the source, who turned out to be an elderly woman with the strap of an umbrella hanging from her forearm. She smelled as if she were bathed in that stuff. Maybe sensing his annoyance, the lady smiled apologetically. - desdodo1yrReplied to DaoistDarkCh 18 Breakout
- desdodo1yrReplied to Leandro528Ch 2 Chapter 2: Incubus
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