Reviews of Dragons Among Heroes
Dragons Among Heroes
ArcticRage
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All in all a great work so far. 1. English and grammar are on point not to say perfect but it's probably a 9.5 out of 10. 2. The plot is amazing and the build of each arc was amazing with no rushed plot or awkward transitions 3. The character dialogues are amazing and there is no forced interaction or forced relation to say of, well maybe the first convo betwenn mc and jennifer walters could have gone a bit better lol, 4. For a novel that has a system theme there is little to be left desired as the author makes a great way of letting the reader know of the mc's advancement without unnecessary info dumps and character sheet pop ups. 5. The mc in my opinion is very likeable and realistic to most mc's who are normal in their own world but become sociopaths/psychopaths in their reincarnation or something. 6. The mc isn't a bimbo, i mean he flirts a little here and there but has a good head on his shoulder's and his character is really good. So if you are reading this review than in my humble opinion, this would be one of the top ff in this app i've ever read and that's saying something cuz i've read a good amount of ff's here.
Author has no mention of how the spirits work the mc turns from a pathetic weakling who cant even ask out his school crush to all of a sudden being able to flirt and go and casual dates with grown women being able to « tease » them which i dont even need to mention how cringe the dialogue is please tone it down and keep it in your pants mc and the fact he takes everything so nonchalantly also seven chapters in he has jus been sleepinh trash author and trash story😐
(google translator) - The MC is a beta, he just doesn't know how to say "no" as in the case of the fantastic quartet investigating him. Another point that I thought was bad was the system, he is very dependent on the system, the Mc and the type that only reacts, he does not act, I mean that the MC is not proactive in many issues, whether socially or in the search for power, always and told by Mc that he seeks power to protect, but the mc does not train in matters of physics, martial arts or in the matter of using his transformation. The author gave him a martial art, but he did not show how he trained to master, you may have the knowledge of something but to work you have to get your muscles and instincts used to something that he did not do. Another point is that the system is quite useless, if the author does not want a rapid increase in power then just give the MC a power and let him train to gain strength. It was not necessary to add a useless system in which it hardly strengthens the MC.
Do I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dude
I've read till chapter 12 and there are a few problems that bothered me. First, the MC sometimes act impulsively and dumb. Second, usually systems are used to give a feeling of accomplishment to the readers when they see the visible improvement in the host's stats and power. The author didn't show us the MC's improvement... Third, the dialogs are weird and cringey. bye exp
