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Review Detail of Poolitzer in Dragons Among Heroes

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Poolitzer
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MC got a System and EVERY random oranization in marvel can read his energy signature whenever he uses his power... Everyone know where he fought and everything is under CONSTANT observation by any organisation. with such a background our mc would be dead or caught within a week. this part of his uselss system and power that tells everyone where he is just ruins the story. i cant read a fight when i KNOW everyone else in the world will know something is happening.... some other examples that tick me off: 1. MC meets fantastic four, they suspect him and want to inspect him and interrogate him. our mc is to beta to just say NO. like anyone would say if some random 4 people want power over your life and time.... 2. MC fights some random invaders in a bunker.... he sees the 2 commanders.... he gets in positions to snipe them.... he kills some RANDOM dude on a computer first and then some useless goons instead of the TWO BOSSES.... at least 1 headshot on the biggest threat would have spared us a useless 2 chapter fightscene..... well thats as far as i got... chapter 10.

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lol it keeps getting worse and worse but it's similar to other trash wn

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