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Xcolibur

Xcolibur

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Love Fanfiction, especially fanfiction with little bit of logic and realism, don't like xianxia-type of MC, MC thinking with his lower part, and emotionless MC without any reason

2019-01-13 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur5d
    Commented

    Author a little bit of advice don't focus too much on MC for this tyoe of story dude, it's better if you show us the effect of your internet cafe to the anime word the character come from

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    Multiverse Internet Cafe(Fanfiction)
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur5d
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    Man it's everything is too fast slow down dude, the point of this kind novel or fic is the character interaction like whqt their thought about this internet cafe, their feeling meeting other person from different universe, what their thought about the game, and you lack that. Hope you improve in writing and fix that thing

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur5d
    Commented

    I want to olay sea of thives vr

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur17d
    Replied to AarconReix

    the one Naruto broke up with Natasha because she choose work over their relationship?

    No other person can kindly take to the fact that their girlfriend is a spy who completes mission using appeal and body allure amongst her other skillset. Not to mention how hurt people would usually feel when they realise their partner wasn't completely honest with them.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur18d
    Replied to NightMightFall

    yeah thats true man, i used to love harem so much, but now it's just annoying to read them because sometimes some of them isn't well written and feel forced

    'This is not so bad…' She thought with a blissful smile on her face.
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    The Great Demon System
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur18d
    Replied to RossDog

    superpower

    The group then went to sleep at 2 am in order to wake up refreshed for school the next day.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur18d
    Replied to Milosic

    if u read properly it's state that he did meditation when he sleep acting

    Moby only had 20 Demon Energy left so he only had 10 seconds to end the fight.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur18d
    Replied to Joshua_Iyo

    but Tokyo Ghoul isn't best interpretation for that, if u want a quiet good interpretation read Arifureta the lightnovel not anime version. when hajime(Mc) hair turned gray it's take more than a days

    He had no teeth, his nose broken, his face's bone structure all crooked and bent out of shape, and some of his hair had turned white from their previous black. His facial expression the moment he died was the most disturbing thing of all. The expression he wore was that of someone who was given a false sense of hope, only to have it snuffed out moments later in the cruellest way possible.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur18d
    Commented

    Here's the explanation for oh the smart reader, isn't it clear that he's going to suicide without the fucking necklace because if you read properly then you dimwit should know that he was going to suicide because of the stress in chap 2(?) and then suddenly military guy give him box with necklace inside then he put those necklace in his neck become happy go lucky person

    'That is true. I would have definitely committed suicide long ago if it weren't for necklace absorbing all my negative energy,' he thought.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur19d
    Replied to MARDGEER

    isn't that obvious, because in the first chapter when he wore the necklace he's suddenly go happy lucky dude from sad depressed boy

    At this point, Moby was too far to hear anything they are saying. Although Moby is considered handsome, he never got any female attention. He has silky black hair that fell past his eyes, jade green eyes and fairly pale skin with no sign of acne. He was also a fairly respectable height standing at 6 feet tall. Moby never even once considered that he was handsome because females always try to stay away from him. Without fail, every female that found out that Moby was poor with no abilities would avoid him like the plague. Their perception of him instantly takes a complete 180 as their interest for him turns into disgust and bullying. Moby never thought this was the problem and just chalked it up to him just being ugly and didn't think too much of it.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur19d
    Replied to Maxfun3

    because they are female, that's it

    Ch 57 Unlikely AIlies
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    Injustice: The Path to Hell
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur20d
    Commented

    That's Naruto Trait throughout the series he never give up

    Even some of the more dangerous criminals out there knew that sometimes it was best to surrender. Black Hood on the other hand didn't, he just kept getting up for more and no matter how many times Robin had showed him that no matter what he did, Robin would always have an answer for it. Despite all that, Black Hood just kept coming.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur22d
    Replied to henrique195

    same man i mean if she love yiu it's doesn't matter if she is virgin or not, but just make her virgin so we can stop hearing baby cry in the comments

    Ch 25 Episode 25- Our time together! (18+)
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    Procrastinator Gets The Best Cheat- MCU Fanfic
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur26d
    Commented

    School didn't teach me this thing

    "Since they've seen us socializin' with so many people. Remember, to each of these chicks, they don't know that we met everyone tonight. Few people approach so many strangers, so they must believe we already knew many of these people. In other words, they think we're popular, which is a large part of social status, a valuable trait to chicks. Like how you can build attraction with seduction skills, you can build social status with pivoting."
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Commented

    his nervous but on the surface he look calm and ready to drop a bomb

    As an expert in the field, the professor recognized the difference in those eyes--they were calm now!
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Commented

    famn this guy read too much ntr hentai

    Zachary saw her concern and frowned. 'This b*tch is about to go on a date with me and she's still worried about another man? Once I get her in my bed, I'll teach her proper manners!' He leaned over to her. "Miyuki, I was thinking we'd go for Italian…Do you like Italian?"
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Replied to RossDog

    his oalm are sweaty, knees weak arm are heavy, there's a vomit on his sweater already mom spaghetti

    Ben's turn would soon be up. Miyuki looked over at him and chewed on her lip in worry. She never expected him to win. She only wanted Zachary to leave him alone for the week, which he did so far. You could say she reached her goal. So there was no point in Ben giving a speech since this seminar didn't give credits or grades anyway. "Benjamin-san…" she said. "You don't have to speak…It's fine."
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Replied to JFalcon

    I used to had stutter when public speaking and i never had that's kind of experience

    Ben gripped the wooden desk's edges and closed his eyes for several moments, taking deep breaths to calm his still shaken nerves. When he opened them, he discovered people snickering under their breath. Others asked them what was funny and they pointed to Ben. After a minute, half the class had at least giggled at him.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Commented

    damn now this interesting

    'Well...whatever, it seems like you truly don't mean anything ill, and even if you did, I wouldn't be able to do anything so...my preferences, huh? It would help me more to know in which world I will have to live but I guess male, average looks, uninteresting on the first glance, also, if its some kind of fantasy cruel world, it would be helpful if the body had no relatives but would live somewhere secure enough. Also, please make him at least 15 years old.' The soul answered with slight amusement. Ever since the soul started regaining its old memories, it also started affecting its personality a little bit.
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  • Xcolibur
    Xcolibur1mth
    Replied to Anime_Forever_8002

    you use anime profile picture and you don't even know sake?

    "Not even sake?"
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