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dminor101

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2018-05-09 JoinedUnited States
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    dminor10110d
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    I really enjoyed your work but I just can't take the bouncing around of characters worlds timelines and multiverse in the midd of an already great story that didn't conclude it drives me nuts. if it my reading then I'm sorry but danm I'm reading dc then multiverse with azula then morgan then you drop a new one again. too much for me thanks for the read until here good luck

    Ch 95 Your Better
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    From Mortal to Divinity
    Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
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    dminor10129d
    Commented

    it's a good chapter however I think you should have made the fight be recorded to spread across the underworld as a shadowy figure who shows power. not everyone cares if they die and adding fear into the mix that they can see rather then believe will help fuel his dark side powers

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    The Greatest Sith Lord
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    dminor1013mth
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    thought he said they can last a minute?

    I also requested a couple of specialized tools that could help me in various situations like a high-end laser cutter, a strong and compact flamethrower. I knew that I didn't really need the belt, as I could just open a very small gate to my room (I always had a finger observing my whole room) and take the items I needed, but you never know, I would probably be handy one day.
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    MHA: The Quirk Engineer
    Anime & Comics · TheOnlyRaiko
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