avid fantasy reader
I really enjoyed your work but I just can't take the bouncing around of characters worlds timelines and multiverse in the midd of an already great story that didn't conclude it drives me nuts. if it my reading then I'm sorry but danm I'm reading dc then multiverse with azula then morgan then you drop a new one again. too much for me thanks for the read until here good luck
it's a good chapter however I think you should have made the fight be recorded to spread across the underworld as a shadowy figure who shows power. not everyone cares if they die and adding fear into the mix that they can see rather then believe will help fuel his dark side powers
thought he said they can last a minute?