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  • moty
    moty3h
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    it's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better

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  • moty
    moty4h
    Replied to KrisVFX

    nice

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  • moty
    moty4h
    Commented

    even if you want to give the MC a weakness to exploit, this is just to unbalanced

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  • moty
    moty5h
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    I don't know why you made your MC unnecessarily hated

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  • moty
    moty6h
    Posted

    creepy as **** I just need the xp sssssssssssssppppppppppppppppppaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  • moty
    moty6h
    Commented

    u know it actually hurts if replied with a thank you to I love you

    "Thank -sob. -sob, you." She replied trying to stop her tears from spilling.
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  • moty
    moty8h
    Commented

    u know a lot of this thing would have corroded by now

    So far, they have found 326 sunken ships and airplanes. Some ships dating all the way back to the 14th century. Gold, silver, gems from merchant ships, steel from modern ships, silverware from heaps of capsized cruise ships over the years, my loot kept on increasing.
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  • moty
    moty8h
    Commented

    dududu dudududum

    "Let's try to change that in this lifetime." I say to myself, making my way downtown, walkin' fast, faces pass, and I'm Stark-bound.*
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  • moty
    moty10h
    Commented

    ?? busiest?

    The road was called the Aurelia Mountain Road. The name does not imply that it was a road on a mountain in the literal sense, but a mountain of gold exists on this road. Aurelia Mountain Road was lined up with all the kingdom's most extravagant and finest restaurants, stores, entertainments and was the bustiest area in the entire kingdom.
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  • moty
    moty11h
    Commented

    u know I forgot this is a modern civilization

    During the rainy night, a group of cars have arrived at a run-down house before parking. Staring through the glass window, the Duke looked at the building with a frown from the passenger seat.
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  • moty
    moty13h
    Commented

    physiological

    "You can't blame me. It's a natural psychological reaction." Leon said helplessly.
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  • moty
    moty14h
    Commented

    [img=recommend]

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  • moty
    moty14h
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  • moty
    moty14h
    Posted

    it's a bit of a mish mash of several genres but it's really good. ssssssssssssspppppppppppppaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  • moty
    moty19h
    Commented

    馃槶 I don't have the money for premium but I'll try to support you

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  • moty
    moty1d
    Commented

    what the fUck?

    [I've found Xie Tian. Can I eat him?]
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  • moty
    moty1d
    Commented

    maybe she's one of the female leads

    'Is she a heroine? Can she also be a main character like Xie Tian?'
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  • moty
    moty1d
    Replied to Akio_Okia

    harem?

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  • moty
    moty1d
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    harem?

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  • moty
    moty1d
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    harem?

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