That only made the Koreans stronger.

Afeus isn't the strongest but if you underestimate what he can do, then he'll make you pay.

This is like a good wrestling storyline. Hime is overlooking her current opponent and that's about to bite her in the end.

Ladies and gentlemen, it's time for the second quarterfinal match of this exciting tournament. Fighting from the red corner, she is the half-demon huntress from the desert, Hime! And her opponent fighting from the blue corner, he is the theoretical genius, the master of alchemy and Serbek's own dark horse, Afeus!

This is the second Dragon Age book that I've read on here. There are only a few editing errors. The story has been pretty good, but there seemed to be a confusing twist after a while.

If your haters and imitators bother you too much, then send them my way. Idgaf about stepping on feelings or heads.

Lynerparel, you said that you were feeling melancholic when you wrote that author's note and that's okay. Everyone has ups and downs. Just remember that having fans is great, but having haters is better. People only hate when they feel that you are doing better than they can/are.

The Queen is making sure that no one upsets Ren this time.

Primordial demon just got played like a chump.

Lynerparel you do a lot. Don't burn yourself out.

I checked my new body in the morning light I'm gonna cause chaos and make sure I do it right No time for talking just time to run And ghouls they wanna have fun Oh ghouls just want to have fun

Ren returning around the semifinals or the finals would be awesome.

Afeus has now met both of the childhood friends. He doesn't know how close he was to reuniting them. At least Valdel gave him some good advice to help him in the tournament. Although that move wouldn't help against Lara or Valdel.

This is a promising story set in the Dragon Age universe. The author has created a protagonist with a tragic backstory, but there's more going in than meets the eye.

Place your bets.

Lynerparel loves cliffhangers

Lynerparel, I can understand why others would want to steal your work. You create characters that resonate with your readers and are an excellent author. Keep up the good work and try not to let the clones ruin your endeavors.

Lynerparel, now I understand why your AS fans didn't want you working on anything else.

Fifth

The tournament has begun and Ren's on a quest to find Tsukiko. These next chapters are going to be good.