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Einlion
EinlionLv64yr
2020-07-09 04:39

Easily a top 3 fanfic. It's very difficult to write a novel with comedic undertones that doesn't undermine its own plot for a cheap laugh. I look forward to seeing this novel continue for a long time. Take care and don't let the toxicity in the community get to you.

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TheIcePillar
TheIcePillarLv1

First. Nice review.

PandaSempai
PandaSempaiLv3

What is the top 2 fanfic is this is top 3? (I know, it's a stupid question! Haha)

Psan
PsanLv5

If master eilion likes it then it cannot be bad!!!!.

westgal
westgalLv14

Master Einlion him/herself is here

The_Heavens_
The_Heavens_Lv4

Since Ein said this is good, I'm going to give this a try.

xxAsura
xxAsuraLv13

How could sir Einlion be wrong, I shall read it immediately! ;)

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

Does it have any mature scene? Or it's japanese beta mc?

prince_awesome
prince_awesomeLv4

there is no harem yet , its just the mc dominating the intire cosmos . *spoiler alert* he even replaced the religion section of the library in asgard with jojo's bizarre adventure 😂😂

DearCompanion:Does it have any mature scene? Or it's japanese beta mc?
benennenden
benennendenLv1

Thanks bro, since there's no harem, There's no culture I'm out

prince_awesome:there is no harem yet , its just the mc dominating the intire cosmos . *spoiler alert* he even replaced the religion section of the library in asgard with jojo's bizarre adventure 😂😂
prince_awesome
prince_awesomeLv4

maybe he'll start building his harem soon 🤷‍♂️

benennenden:Thanks bro, since there's no harem, There's no culture I'm out
TheHottestThing
TheHottestThingLv3

God Einlion hath spoken. What are you waiting for? Add to Library now!

HolyFBI
HolyFBILv2

Nice

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

+1

DearCompanion:Does it have any mature scene? Or it's japanese beta mc?
He_is_cruel
He_is_cruelLv13

He is not beta and there is no mature scene. I personally don't want one.(opinion).

DearCompanion:Does it have any mature scene? Or it's japanese beta mc?
He_is_cruel
He_is_cruelLv13

Most of the time the mc image gets destroyed in my head and they look like perverts. Thats why I love this novel it's not r18.

He_is_cruel:He is not beta and there is no mature scene. I personally don't want one.(opinion).
Zoomshoe
ZoomshoeLv3

Guess I'll give this one a read then.

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Legendary_PersonLv5

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Laplaces_dream
Laplaces_dreamLv4

I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!

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