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Laplaces_dream
Laplaces_dreamLv43yr
2021-09-24 14:15

I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!

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Flowwer_
Flowwer_Lv13

Clod443
Clod443Lv1

Lol

Quem_Matou_Owen
Quem_Matou_OwenLv2

You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]

Laplaces_dream
Laplaces_dreamLv4

"It would make sense on Konosuba's part" Yeah... That's when I wrote the review itself.

Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

you gave this book 1 star just because of konosuba ark??? I mean even if it's boring to some extent it has some good things such as character development, I guess some people get unsatisfied no matter what, if the character development is focused on mc they have a problem, if it is focused on everyone then that's a problem, if it's focused on side characters then again that's a problem. I mean i get your pain but this fanfic doesn't deserve a 1 star for this.

SEEKER
SEEKERLv14

most of the readers skipped the konosuba arc

Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
abcdefghi987654321
abcdefghi987654321Lv3

Onxio
OnxioLv5

Wonder if author will ever respond to this

Discarded
DiscardedLv4

this is the most brave comments i have read in this fic. you deserve medal my man. i decide to not read this because i agree with you, i'm here for dxd fandom and how mc navigate it. i don't want to read a story of jumble mess multiverse crossover fandom or fic which plague by many OCs who takes canon character roles and screentime. good review mate

ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

There is only a relative few chapters after Konosuba Part FORTY-SIX. Your argument is invalid.

Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
Ender_Child
Ender_ChildLv4

give it a chance

Discarded:this is the most brave comments i have read in this fic. you deserve medal my man. i decide to not read this because i agree with you, i'm here for dxd fandom and how mc navigate it. i don't want to read a story of jumble mess multiverse crossover fandom or fic which plague by many OCs who takes canon character roles and screentime. good review mate
Dokja_49_51
Dokja_49_51Lv13

Was gonna read this but you save my time.

Michi_Dodo
Michi_DodoLv14

lol

MasGalonAqua
MasGalonAquaLv12

nah, I skipped the whole konosuba arc. I was promised a dxd fanfic and Annhilator maker Longinus, not konosuba fanfic. if the author had written this novel as "Konosuba fanfic" then I would read the whole arc

Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
MasGalonAqua
MasGalonAquaLv12

impatient? dude, take a look at the total chapters for konosuba Arc. 40+ chapters!! You're a prophet if you have the patience to read the whole side arc. I mean, this is DXD Fanfic, not Konosuba Fanfic

Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
darknexx97848
darknexx97848Lv4

I for one don't mind the au but he moment that I read multiple reincarnators I lost all interest

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Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

This novel lacks a profound review so here am I, to present you with a detailed one. Our Mc is reincarnated into DxD with a non-sentinel system and a chat-group in his phone through which he can contact other anime characters. Mc's personality tends towards rationality, he isn't polite to others and usually acts indifferent towards them. He cares about his mother, sister and father. He is friends with Saji who isn't a devil yet. An enemy is an enemy for our Mc, doesn't matter if the enemy is a woman or man. As the title suggests, Mc possesses Longinus 'Annihilate Maker' who gives the user the ability to create monsters of any kind using imagination, information and energy as a base for creation. Currently, other than creating a spider who can hide him from the supernatural, a blue butterfly which creates illusions, he is in the process of creating a monster who can manipulate senjutsu. He wants to avoid interacting with other supernaturals until he gains enough strength as he will be dragged into the plot no matter what. Currently, his direct combat capabilities are unknown also he doesn't like Red Dragon Boob emperor. This is the summary of what is going on in the novel. Now what does this story has to offer are as follows. 1. Updates:- One per day 2. Background:-Good but there isn't much in-depth details or visuals though Mc is described as of how he looks. 3. Character design:-8/10 A bit naive, he needs to mature a bit as his opponents are going to use whatever they can against him. Basically, he needs to be creative and hide his steps from others. Cover up his tracks and try not to use his powers within the school building where he is basically within potential enemy territory. You can't just put a teacher under illusion within the enemy territory where other supernaturals can actually be monitoring you. 4. Imagination and writing quality:-8/10 Extremely creative author as he is able to come up with some truly interesting ideas for the ability. Also, the writing quality is good, nothing out of ordinary but makes the story enjoyable. My personal thoughts on the novel:- Very good DXD fanfic as there is basically no good DXD fanfictions out there. I would like the novel more if Mc can act more secretly, especially when his friend is going to be a part of a potential danger to him (Sona). Plz do not engage with Rias and be creative...... Overall this fanfic is truly worth reading, I hope it isn't dropped..... Stay safe and stay inside...... ~Diseda

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