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Obsideon
ObsideonLv44yr
2020-06-23 21:49

Just consider it author-san Balance breaker:Fusion with ur summoned monster J.Drive:Overhaul(MHA) GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD

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He_is_cruel
He_is_cruelLv13

I am actually curious what would happen if he goes there since you know what he is if you read it. He something( That's a spoiler). That place is full of heroes which would not agree with him

True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

When I read this, I hear it like like a jojo fight. Tf

Shub_Niggurath
Shub_NiggurathLv4

I mean, what are they going to do? He could litteraly just flap his wing and they'll get deleted.

He_is_cruel:I am actually curious what would happen if he goes there since you know what he is if you read it. He something( That's a spoiler). That place is full of heroes which would not agree with him
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Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

This novel lacks a profound review so here am I, to present you with a detailed one. Our Mc is reincarnated into DxD with a non-sentinel system and a chat-group in his phone through which he can contact other anime characters. Mc's personality tends towards rationality, he isn't polite to others and usually acts indifferent towards them. He cares about his mother, sister and father. He is friends with Saji who isn't a devil yet. An enemy is an enemy for our Mc, doesn't matter if the enemy is a woman or man. As the title suggests, Mc possesses Longinus 'Annihilate Maker' who gives the user the ability to create monsters of any kind using imagination, information and energy as a base for creation. Currently, other than creating a spider who can hide him from the supernatural, a blue butterfly which creates illusions, he is in the process of creating a monster who can manipulate senjutsu. He wants to avoid interacting with other supernaturals until he gains enough strength as he will be dragged into the plot no matter what. Currently, his direct combat capabilities are unknown also he doesn't like Red Dragon Boob emperor. This is the summary of what is going on in the novel. Now what does this story has to offer are as follows. 1. Updates:- One per day 2. Background:-Good but there isn't much in-depth details or visuals though Mc is described as of how he looks. 3. Character design:-8/10 A bit naive, he needs to mature a bit as his opponents are going to use whatever they can against him. Basically, he needs to be creative and hide his steps from others. Cover up his tracks and try not to use his powers within the school building where he is basically within potential enemy territory. You can't just put a teacher under illusion within the enemy territory where other supernaturals can actually be monitoring you. 4. Imagination and writing quality:-8/10 Extremely creative author as he is able to come up with some truly interesting ideas for the ability. Also, the writing quality is good, nothing out of ordinary but makes the story enjoyable. My personal thoughts on the novel:- Very good DXD fanfic as there is basically no good DXD fanfictions out there. I would like the novel more if Mc can act more secretly, especially when his friend is going to be a part of a potential danger to him (Sona). Plz do not engage with Rias and be creative...... Overall this fanfic is truly worth reading, I hope it isn't dropped..... Stay safe and stay inside...... ~Diseda

Laplaces_dream
Laplaces_dreamLv4

I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!

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