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Avengtank
AvengtankLv54yr
2020-08-25 18:52

Well i like the story very much , i mean the character and story progression is very good and basically everything in this novel is god tier but except the actilual MC. I dnt about other guys but the MC is cringy as fk , too much cringe to go though it with a straight face. I mean comeone he was boiling with anger and he want to kill people just because hos friends saw his pic with a cat. Moreover the character of the MC is like a antisocial person and an introvert. He behaves like he knows way too much and with that type of personality idk what to say. Comeon guys lets be serious tundere and the personaly MC have is way different , i got it the author wanted to make the personality a tundere type but instead he made it a cringy type where the MC gets triggered by most unexpected things and then after getting triggered he behaves all knowing and no one can best him . Love the awesome story line though.

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Soul_Caliber
Soul_CaliberAuthor

Thank for the review. Yeah, like you said. Cringey is very related to your personal opinion of something and it's your thing, so you do you. And sadly, don't take most of the things the Mc says as facts or you'll end up trolled very hard. Fun fact for you: Mc never said he's a tsundere.

Long_Live_The_King
Long_Live_The_KingLv3

Tundere is some kind of pokemon?

Long_Live_The_King
Long_Live_The_KingLv3

Tunderes is some kind of new pokemon author-san?

Soul_Caliber:Thank for the review. Yeah, like you said. Cringey is very related to your personal opinion of something and it's your thing, so you do you. And sadly, don't take most of the things the Mc says as facts or you'll end up trolled very hard. Fun fact for you: Mc never said he's a tsundere.
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

The author has a character who sole trait is his edge. Wasting numerous chapters on exposition and the chat group hardly comes into play. His powers are generic and plot armor is heavy.

Soul_Caliber
Soul_CaliberAuthor

Lmao! You really gave me a laugh. Thank you for your funny comment.

David_Drake:The author has a character who sole trait is his edge. Wasting numerous chapters on exposition and the chat group hardly comes into play. His powers are generic and plot armor is heavy.
Bootylover
BootyloverLv11

What plot armor In the whole 110+ chapters i have seen plot armor obly once

David_Drake:The author has a character who sole trait is his edge. Wasting numerous chapters on exposition and the chat group hardly comes into play. His powers are generic and plot armor is heavy.
Dhananjey_gk
Dhananjey_gkLv1

The story is a fanfiction with a comedic edge filled character who is in denial 5 stars u have my vote👍

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

I don't know, maybe when he got ddraig and then got the ley line vein to fuel is annihilation maker. Now we got close to 30 chapters of a stupid side plot with no end in sight. Not to mention a ton of chapters dedicated to fate bs

Bootylover:What plot armor In the whole 110+ chapters i have seen plot armor obly once
ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

sacred gears can be taken forcefully which kills the owner, and he took it with the gear wanting to transfer which it could, gears of a high tier can leave their partners whever so that's not plot is just ddrag using his head

David_Drake:I don't know, maybe when he got ddraig and then got the ley line vein to fuel is annihilation maker. Now we got close to 30 chapters of a stupid side plot with no end in sight. Not to mention a ton of chapters dedicated to fate bs
ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

I do agree the fate is useless, fate and dxd do not mix at all

David_Drake:I don't know, maybe when he got ddraig and then got the ley line vein to fuel is annihilation maker. Now we got close to 30 chapters of a stupid side plot with no end in sight. Not to mention a ton of chapters dedicated to fate bs
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Well I am wrong, this fic is worse than I thought Konosuba has taken over isn't that hilarious author-san?

D21
D21Lv5

Sorry I fell asleep with your comment.

David_Drake:The author has a character who sole trait is his edge. Wasting numerous chapters on exposition and the chat group hardly comes into play. His powers are generic and plot armor is heavy.
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Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

This novel lacks a profound review so here am I, to present you with a detailed one. Our Mc is reincarnated into DxD with a non-sentinel system and a chat-group in his phone through which he can contact other anime characters. Mc's personality tends towards rationality, he isn't polite to others and usually acts indifferent towards them. He cares about his mother, sister and father. He is friends with Saji who isn't a devil yet. An enemy is an enemy for our Mc, doesn't matter if the enemy is a woman or man. As the title suggests, Mc possesses Longinus 'Annihilate Maker' who gives the user the ability to create monsters of any kind using imagination, information and energy as a base for creation. Currently, other than creating a spider who can hide him from the supernatural, a blue butterfly which creates illusions, he is in the process of creating a monster who can manipulate senjutsu. He wants to avoid interacting with other supernaturals until he gains enough strength as he will be dragged into the plot no matter what. Currently, his direct combat capabilities are unknown also he doesn't like Red Dragon Boob emperor. This is the summary of what is going on in the novel. Now what does this story has to offer are as follows. 1. Updates:- One per day 2. Background:-Good but there isn't much in-depth details or visuals though Mc is described as of how he looks. 3. Character design:-8/10 A bit naive, he needs to mature a bit as his opponents are going to use whatever they can against him. Basically, he needs to be creative and hide his steps from others. Cover up his tracks and try not to use his powers within the school building where he is basically within potential enemy territory. You can't just put a teacher under illusion within the enemy territory where other supernaturals can actually be monitoring you. 4. Imagination and writing quality:-8/10 Extremely creative author as he is able to come up with some truly interesting ideas for the ability. Also, the writing quality is good, nothing out of ordinary but makes the story enjoyable. My personal thoughts on the novel:- Very good DXD fanfic as there is basically no good DXD fanfictions out there. I would like the novel more if Mc can act more secretly, especially when his friend is going to be a part of a potential danger to him (Sona). Plz do not engage with Rias and be creative...... Overall this fanfic is truly worth reading, I hope it isn't dropped..... Stay safe and stay inside...... ~Diseda

Laplaces_dream
Laplaces_dreamLv4

I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!

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