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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv53yr
2021-02-03 18:58

Beginning was good. Then we have billions of fate chapters that make no sense, powers make no sense, you have no clue what is happening. After that we get KONUSUBA... what a joke and waste of my time skipping all of it. I suggest drop this when MC gets sent to the FATE world, you won't miss anything and just think of that as the end of the fanfic.

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Soul_Caliber
Soul_CaliberAuthor

Hahaha! lmao, this is so funny. This review has to be the new top ridiculous review I ever got, hahaha.

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Nothing ridiculous about it. To get any enjoyment out of the fate arc you need to have watched a lot of fate series, otherwise it makes no sense. And then we have konusuba world... konusuba world WITHOUT THE MC. Yeah that world is boring af, much less when our MC is not even there.

Soul_Caliber:Hahaha! lmao, this is so funny. This review has to be the new top ridiculous review I ever got, hahaha.
Soul_Caliber
Soul_CaliberAuthor

At start maybe it wasn't funny, even if it's kinda hilarious. But man, the last two lines gave me a good laugh.

Aurafyre
AurafyreLv13

So sad that you're reading a fanfiction without having enjoyed the various franchises the fanfiction follows, and even sadder that you can't handle a few longer arcs that aren't to your taste in a story where your main complaint should be the grammar issues Boo hoo

Hewwo_Jesus
Hewwo_JesusLv3

Isn't that kinda the point of a fanfic, we already know the world so no need for explanation, to me it was clear as day maybe because I spent a few hours reading about the fate world since it's interesting but it's more like it isn't your cup of tea imo

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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Problem was. There was no explanation of many of the stuff/names/characters about fate. Considering how many chapters were on fate, as some1 who hasnt watched all of fate series it sucked.

Hewwo_Jesus:Isn't that kinda the point of a fanfic, we already know the world so no need for explanation, to me it was clear as day maybe because I spent a few hours reading about the fate world since it's interesting but it's more like it isn't your cup of tea imo
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

read the title of the fanfic...

Hewwo_Jesus:Isn't that kinda the point of a fanfic, we already know the world so no need for explanation, to me it was clear as day maybe because I spent a few hours reading about the fate world since it's interesting but it's more like it isn't your cup of tea imo
Eon101
Eon101Lv5

dude there is a whole fandom of the Type-moon franchise in the web... if have time to read and argue about this FANFICTION, at least you can do a quick Google search and read about the arc you were reading at that time....

BrabbitX:Problem was. There was no explanation of many of the stuff/names/characters about fate. Considering how many chapters were on fate, as some1 who hasnt watched all of fate series it sucked.
Aurafyre
AurafyreLv13

Not even like it should be that hard, it's the Fuyuki HGW, literally the most fleshed out arc in the entire FATE franchise, and the only things weird are what is brought over from FGO. Because FGO's mechanics are really complicated, apparently?

Eon101:dude there is a whole fandom of the Type-moon franchise in the web... if have time to read and argue about this FANFICTION, at least you can do a quick Google search and read about the arc you were reading at that time....
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

ur funny.

Eon101:dude there is a whole fandom of the Type-moon franchise in the web... if have time to read and argue about this FANFICTION, at least you can do a quick Google search and read about the arc you were reading at that time....
Long_Live_The_King
Long_Live_The_KingLv3

I sincerely appreciate you for continuing to write with these nonsense. Thank you for not giving up even when you see human stupidity at its finest.

Soul_Caliber:Hahaha! lmao, this is so funny. This review has to be the new top ridiculous review I ever got, hahaha.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

stfu retard. all you retards defending this retarded retard shit. i guess retards enjoy retardness, what a surprise. go suck some author dick.

Long_Live_The_King:I sincerely appreciate you for continuing to write with these nonsense. Thank you for not giving up even when you see human stupidity at its finest.
Long_Live_The_King
Long_Live_The_KingLv3

Okay? How much hostility. Relaxing and take your time. I wasn't even talking to you but I guess the fact that I indirectly call you an idiot or your review gives you some leeway to return the facts to me with insults so I don't judge you. But your giving one star reviews only counting the bad aspects or the ones that seem bad due to your ignorance. Honestly one star is too little for a fair evaluation of this work so it can only be nonsense.You have the right to give an arbitrary, unspecific, meaningless evaluation and where in the end you did not say anything useful, anyone can give a star by pressing a button, anyone can do it and they have the right but it does not mean that what they say is correct or suitable. But don't worry, reviews like these make my day to laugh and many people on Webnovel follow your example so you are not alone but next time if you write a nonsense at least do it more longer otherwise my fun will end very quickly. There is nothing else I need to tell you so I hope you have a good day and have a more appropriate review or at least nonsense that I can laugh at next time. Bye bye 🎶

BrabbitX:stfu retard. all you retards defending this retarded retard shit. i guess retards enjoy retardness, what a surprise. go suck some author dick.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

relax retard

Long_Live_The_King:Okay? How much hostility. Relaxing and take your time. I wasn't even talking to you but I guess the fact that I indirectly call you an idiot or your review gives you some leeway to return the facts to me with insults so I don't judge you. But your giving one star reviews only counting the bad aspects or the ones that seem bad due to your ignorance. Honestly one star is too little for a fair evaluation of this work so it can only be nonsense.You have the right to give an arbitrary, unspecific, meaningless evaluation and where in the end you did not say anything useful, anyone can give a star by pressing a button, anyone can do it and they have the right but it does not mean that what they say is correct or suitable. But don't worry, reviews like these make my day to laugh and many people on Webnovel follow your example so you are not alone but next time if you write a nonsense at least do it more longer otherwise my fun will end very quickly. There is nothing else I need to tell you so I hope you have a good day and have a more appropriate review or at least nonsense that I can laugh at next time. Bye bye 🎶
Long_Live_The_King
Long_Live_The_KingLv3

Ok

BrabbitX:relax retard
Wholesome_Daoist
Wholesome_DaoistLv3

I agree it’s funny Reading children Argue cause They can’t understand or to lazy to search it up. Narrator-chan:This guy...calling others children when he’s barely 11 has he no shame.Their probably years older than him.

Long_Live_The_King:Okay? How much hostility. Relaxing and take your time. I wasn't even talking to you but I guess the fact that I indirectly call you an idiot or your review gives you some leeway to return the facts to me with insults so I don't judge you. But your giving one star reviews only counting the bad aspects or the ones that seem bad due to your ignorance. Honestly one star is too little for a fair evaluation of this work so it can only be nonsense.You have the right to give an arbitrary, unspecific, meaningless evaluation and where in the end you did not say anything useful, anyone can give a star by pressing a button, anyone can do it and they have the right but it does not mean that what they say is correct or suitable. But don't worry, reviews like these make my day to laugh and many people on Webnovel follow your example so you are not alone but next time if you write a nonsense at least do it more longer otherwise my fun will end very quickly. There is nothing else I need to tell you so I hope you have a good day and have a more appropriate review or at least nonsense that I can laugh at next time. Bye bye 🎶
96YOUNG_MASTER96
96YOUNG_MASTER96Lv4

Lol i love arguments like this

Long_Live_The_King:Okay? How much hostility. Relaxing and take your time. I wasn't even talking to you but I guess the fact that I indirectly call you an idiot or your review gives you some leeway to return the facts to me with insults so I don't judge you. But your giving one star reviews only counting the bad aspects or the ones that seem bad due to your ignorance. Honestly one star is too little for a fair evaluation of this work so it can only be nonsense.You have the right to give an arbitrary, unspecific, meaningless evaluation and where in the end you did not say anything useful, anyone can give a star by pressing a button, anyone can do it and they have the right but it does not mean that what they say is correct or suitable. But don't worry, reviews like these make my day to laugh and many people on Webnovel follow your example so you are not alone but next time if you write a nonsense at least do it more longer otherwise my fun will end very quickly. There is nothing else I need to tell you so I hope you have a good day and have a more appropriate review or at least nonsense that I can laugh at next time. Bye bye 🎶
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Lol I called out the fate BS a long time ago and had my reviews deleted a few times. Look at the comments rn in the current chapters. There's a few hundred people agreeing with your review

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

Same, I did a point by point breakdown of the novel in a review but that was deleted 8ish months ago, I find it both funny and sad how many people including the author show their edge at an actual review but spammed 5* 'reviews' that is just a bunch of symbols are never commented on; typical snowflake echo chamber behaviour.

David_Drake:Lol I called out the fate BS a long time ago and had my reviews deleted a few times. Look at the comments rn in the current chapters. There's a few hundred people agreeing with your review
Lord_DaWhite
Lord_DaWhiteLv3

LoLoLoL

BrabbitX:relax retard
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