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Naruto: The journey of Rai Inazuma

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Uhg.. one moment I was having a blast the next second, am on the city Floor Dying... ------------- Naruto fanfic and yeah of course I don't own the damn thing as for its kishimoto's and will forever be But I have my Own personaly created Oc's so that's that. ---------- And this wont be 100% following the plot of canon so people that dont like canon getting messed up then leave immediately. There will be some parts of the original canon but anymore will be different. And please when I do just one simple thing dont start saying oh no It a beta mc oh no he's a simp. like please dont... like I said I'll only do stuff in the most logical ways. --------- Welp have a fun read or not it's you not me. -------'xx----- I DO NOT OWN THE COVER PIC I REPEAT I DO NOT OWN THE COVER PIC!!

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NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv14NotSoBigShlong

No-Harem?? Thank god Naruto + harem dont go well together Ive read all chapters (chapter 5) and im really enjoying it Keep up the good work

Arekuruu_Tento
Arekuruu_Tento作者Arekuruu_Tento

So it's me the author this is my first time writing a fanfic so it might be very rocky as we go but bear with me as we go I myself know I might have some errors here and there but all is good and I'll try my best to get this fanfic going so if you will please give it a try for like 2 to 5 chapters it will be greatly appreciated thank You

Kiran_Krishnadas
Kiran_KrishnadasLv1Kiran_Krishnadas

My rating is wrong as I stopped reading after the overpowered wises . It's probably good for some but for me I want a character that grows and acquire powers with his/or her own effort than being given ,but that's just my preference .

Idealist
IdealistLv14Idealist

wq 1 sd 1 cd 3 us 5 wb 2 This novel has very bad grammar and especially its punctuation. You need several moments to understand. The dialogue is very superficial. the jokes are lame and almost nonexistent. I do appreciate if the author doing the job by corrected all the mistake that pointed by the reader. yet... it seems that correcting an author's writing error is a futile attempt.

Hassan_Lighter
Hassan_LighterLv1Hassan_Lighter

This fanfic is legendary it only has 9 chapters but the story development is already golden the grammar is not perfect but it can improve, updates are frequent, and there are Ike 2 chapters every other day. I advise you to read until chp 7 before dropping and giving review.

Dave_Guest
Dave_GuestLv14Dave_Guest

Pretty good. I persnaly would have directly wished for a kekkai tota or mora. Dont drop. It has much potential. ...........................................................................................................................

Enigmation
EnigmationLv4Enigmation

Reviewed as of Chp4(Read on to find out why I couldn't read more) WQ(1/5) - It's unreadable. Misused capitalizations, commas and fullstops. Some paragraphs are far too long. So far I haven't seen any misspellings but misuse of incorrect terms/words. SD(3/5) - Obviously couldn't delve into it much so I'll give it an average score. As much as I could understand, the author did give quite a funny intro. CD(3/5) - Not a fan of the MC's personality but as I've said couldn't delve more so maybe his char will develop more. Thus another average score. US(3/5) - A month since last update so wouldn't keep my hopes up. WB(3/5) - Average score to be a bit more lenient. Conclusion, story might be good but the editing needs so much work to be even barely decent. I don't want to rant too much, the only issue is that this story has such a high rating but it's nonsense, I find it kind of insulting when the grammar and editing of chps need so much work. Language is a medium and if u can't get it halfway right, how are more readers going to enjoy your work? One has to learn how to crawl before they can run. The author might have good ideas but I couldn't read more without getting a headache. This isn't to bash the author, but proper grammar and readability is essential and it's an aspect which is vital for any work to be even decent.

ProfessorLucifer
ProfessorLuciferLv12ProfessorLucifer

Ajax, a twisted scientist, experiments on Wade Wilson, a mercenary, to cure him of cancer and give him healing powers. However, the experiment leaves Wade disfigured and he decides to exact revenge.

INNOCUOUS55
INNOCUOUS55Lv4INNOCUOUS55

Good. Hjdjdjxjxjx. Jjdjsjd jdjsjhshdhddhxhxhdhhdhdhdhddhhddhuddhueduududhdhfhgdccfccchhcjcdjjcch uudud udududududduudjdhcjddhdhdhdhjxjxxjjxjxjxxh dududu

Martial_Pursuit
Martial_PursuitLv4Martial_Pursuit

the dialogue is very clustered give me a headache when reading it. the story is good enough, did make me stop reading when he is given those skill and blood limit. but I do read further and find it to be a fun read, just not for me because of those skill and blood limit. good luck author.

CarrolStark
CarrolStarkLv14CarrolStark

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

War_Lock
War_LockLv2War_Lock

Well! To be honest, finding a Naruto Fan-fic without naive mc bitching around Naruto also , To find a non-harem one is quite difficult like this one. If you write another Fan-fic on Naruto . Think about these underwhelming but overpowered skills . 1) Memory partition and acceleration 2) Observation haki is OP in Naruto . 3) Perfect chakra control

El_Lector_Aburrido
El_Lector_AburridoLv10El_Lector_Aburrido

excelente fanfic el mc es op pero no a nivel operativo me gusta ignora ignora ignora ignora ignoraxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxppxpxppxpxppxppxpxp´p

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