wq 1 sd 1 cd 3 us 5 wb 2 This novel has very bad grammar and especially its punctuation. You need several moments to understand. The dialogue is very superficial. the jokes are lame and almost nonexistent. I do appreciate if the author doing the job by corrected all the mistake that pointed by the reader. yet... it seems that correcting an author's writing error is a futile attempt.
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贊Injustice:Im not sure if you know this but if an author tries to correct something, all the comments will be deleted so thats why authors usually dont correct errors pointed out by viewers.