DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)

I honestly don't know why I was surprised by a nervous protagonist, it's a multiverse story with a villainous protagonist, it couldn't be any different and I can't complain because the author was intelligent, he wrote this obviously for the large nervous web novel audience in a phenomenal way no meme, the story is written in such a way to enhance the MC that Zack Snyder would cry with emotion, one more thing confused me the author is intelligent he aimed at his target audience from the beginning so why do three chapters in a row basically without the MC ? Obviously the audience would hate these chapters, so why? (For the fanboys who come to comment, I have a gun, be careful.)

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You have pick up the one who has most bizarre Kryptonian Physiology. He's Super duper durable, Has most unique power among Kryptonian.

I give Evil MCs a chance but most end up like this. Nonsense mixed with forced tragedy. nothing truly creative or unique about the story at all. just a sad dude writing about a sad MC.

This is a good novel. So far it would be liked by many. But the mc decision making/comon sense skills and intelligence are lacking when he is supposed to be some top scientist. Example: Mc has the ability to travels to different world. For some reason he assumed that only his conscience could go to other worlds. He didn’t even try to experiment with his ability to se it limits. He just assumes and ten years later some how retaliate he can also take his body with him to other worlds. That make the whole staying on Krypton and only leaving one year before it blow up pointless. To improve maybe show you mc though process. Don’t gloss over the details and make power up happen without any reasoning.

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it's like being in science class all again, and i am at chapter 100 and he still hasn't even gotten to DC earth yet, the scientific explanations isn't just for me, although some may like it depending on your taste and he does some illogical stuff sometimes like the seven colored shield or whatever (forgot the name ) why didn't he send the proton stuff to Venus no one would disturb him there I mean I am pretty sure Venus exosphere gets more solar radiation than earth's.

(for new readers out there who rely on the comments for judging whether a novel is good or not, please read it first before deciding to skip, theres a guy named FollMystery and hes spreading fake information about the novel dont believe him this guys account is fake) / for that guy: dude you're reading time is literally NOTHING, what you said was the mc ACTING okay did you even read the chapter or what, also if you red just ONE MORE chapter then you would understand that what you're saying is basically ALL BULL, dude i really don't want to WASTE my time commenting any further on haters like you but i just can't stand the likes of your KIND (worst than haters are fakes) ruining this amazing novel and DETERRING new readers from enjoying themselves. why did you stop SPECIFICALLY on chapter 3 huh, your clearly a fake?!

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I think the idea of ​​this novel is good, but the MC's way of showing that he is the smartest is very bad, like a third-rate villain and we never know how he makes plans or He puts himself at a disadvantage on purpose to prove that he is a genius

I thought about stopping reading novels but after I continued my struggle to keep going. I'm starting to like this novel so I hope it will be updated quickly 5/5 Star [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I'm at chapter 20,and I'm not too sure if I can make it to finish this. I want to know if the story improves in the use of vocabulary and theme or does it stays the same. No spoilers i just want confirmation if it improves.

Good characters, Nice introduction, a slightly smart Mc. but who in their right mind knows about the destruction of thier planet and does nothing. Mc also started running mad all of a sudden and the author tells us it's a mental suggestion in his DNA are you playing with me. our Mc is smart enough to decieve krypton except from a few people but could not see the manipulation when everyone stayed on a planet that was supposed to blow and kill everyone very smart.

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i don't know which world he is in it is quite confusing and I'm gona drop this fic

so far it's fine🥱👉😱🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Not gonna lie, this is one of my favorite web novel right know. In my opinion this is one of the stories some one need to give a try but some problem would be that the reader need to understand and have some kind of knowledge about the worlds presented. Apart from that I like everything, even the aizen wanna be mc we got which I love.🦸‍♂️

At first, this fanfiction was weird. Now it's okay and decent, for those that managed to see it through the awkward stages I'd say it's pretty good. I look forward to reading your stuff. While it may not be the DC fanfiction people sought it's defs the multi-cross I was looking for. It's got range and I'm hoping that you either continue the DC plotline or hop into another world.

Interesting starting story , but in the end ruined . At this point the chapters are like useless fillers with totally random and nothing of value provided to the story. He went from someone , who in the author words "reincarnated" and was somehow intelligent and level headed to a moron who started questioning every little thing and start throwing a tantrum , really disappointing the initial idea had potential , but ruined.