This is a good novel. So far it would be liked by many. But the mc decision making/comon sense skills and intelligence are lacking when he is supposed to be some top scientist. Example: Mc has the ability to travels to different world. For some reason he assumed that only his conscience could go to other worlds. He didn’t even try to experiment with his ability to se it limits. He just assumes and ten years later some how retaliate he can also take his body with him to other worlds. That make the whole staying on Krypton and only leaving one year before it blow up pointless. To improve maybe show you mc though process. Don’t gloss over the details and make power up happen without any reasoning.
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fun fact: intelligents and wisdom are two separate thing
how is this related to my review?
.......*sigh*. ...seriously???......welp
Fun fact: the mc has neither
Who tf is writing like this? Are you a 13-year-old Emo or something?
what makes that assumption?... the *sigh* or the "welp"...cause I think you should have seen what emo people is, cause. they are found in dark and mystery about darkness or something novel or comic or about vampire and drama.....
Emo is a kid with dark long hair and tired eyes saiying: "I haven't friends because they hurt me" -Emo
ah nah, that's just depression. emos are just want to be or wannabe depression cause society forces us blah blah and something related to that
