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The_Last_NativeLv154mth
2024-09-06 01:46

I read up until the point where Neo made up the story about having a baby with Amelia. Overall, I liked the story—there’s great depth and emotion that really draws you in, which is exactly what I look for in a book. However, I’ll wait to pick it back up when someone confirms who the real female lead is. Hopefully, it’s not Amelia, because we all know it should be Elizabeth!

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FailedWriter101Author

Romance isn't a major plot point in my novel, so you can enjoy the novel regardless of it. Still, thank you for giving my novel a try.

FinnsRevengeLv4

Well dang bro, if romance isnt a major plot point you should have no problem saying who the actual love interest is right? Or are you going to dangle it like a worm on a hook as bait?

FailedWriter101:Romance isn't a major plot point in my novel, so you can enjoy the novel regardless of it. Still, thank you for giving my novel a try.
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MangaisLife1Lv2

Well I saw the romance tag and that was a major part of choosing it ! Guess its not worth it then

FailedWriter101:Romance isn't a major plot point in my novel, so you can enjoy the novel regardless of it. Still, thank you for giving my novel a try.
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Sravan_PatriLv1

Bro you read less than 30 chapters how did you decide on romance that fast?

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