FinnsRevenge

Relax bud, no need to be aggressive

I know bro I wanted to see what he'd say. Ive seen you posting the old fanfics on here with the author and sources and I just want to say I appreciate and respect what you're doing. Good job

Hello author, in english lit we use " around speaking. Quotation marks, e.g; "You're finally awake!" "Kaito, my little one, you had me scared to death." Not really sure which language uses lines for spoken words

Who said anything about aggression? You're too much of a hyperactive busybody, relax more

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Nah that one is absolute garbage, stick to this one and dont fk it up like you did with the other one.

Could be cool, main issue is the protag had a very structured background which would have given him self respect and a solid backbone. There's no way beyond author fiat of the mc logically going along with nadia's disgusting actions. Not to mention bro was on a family vacation and there was already a decently established OC right there if you felt like making a lemon. The entire nadia thing just felt awkward af and slapdash. Best advice I can give is the fewer OCs in fanfiction the better. Don't overload bro with broken powers all at once(blacklight and a system) blacklight virus solos all verses without magic, and most with

Seppuku is ritual suicide done in order to restore 'honor' or to save yourself from 'dishonor'. Involves using a wakizashi to stab into your abdomen and slice through the stomach/intestines to bleed to death. Can also have a second part, where someone cuts off your head after the initial stab.

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