Started this with 0 expectations but gotta say, I am pleasantly surprised. At the very least, the idea behind the novel is good. And from what I can see this novel doesn't follow the conventional power systems. The world background is well thought out, this much is clear in just 10 chapters. It is not without its bad points tho. I feel like for a grim reaper that is supposed to be very high ranking, they were tricked by the MC too easily. Of course, its not like the MC lied of something. In fact, what he said made sense. But I personally still feel it would have been better with a more apparent sense of tension. But well, seeing as how this is the author's first time writing I am sure he(?) will learn from his mistakes and improve in no time. Another thing I would like to note is that the covers are all from pinterest and instagram. I would suggest switching to AI arts as some readers would feel weirded out but it. Personally, I don't mind the covers but I do know of people who doesn't like it.
Thanks for the review, I will do my best to improve!
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13
Single fl or harem?
Vainglory0Lv4
single fl
Sonu_Siraj_5546:Single fl or harem?
Blue_PizzaLv4
Mind revealing the type of ship they would be?
Vainglory0:single fl
Vainglory0Lv4
what do you mean by type of ship? can you be more specific?
Blue_Pizza:Mind revealing the type of ship they would be?
Blue_PizzaLv4
Couple ship. Eg grumpy x sunshine
Vainglory0:what do you mean by type of ship? can you be more specific?
Vainglory0Lv4
Well, the only thing that is confirmed is that this is a single fl novel. The author hates harem so it definitely won't be one. However, the author hasn't decided on who the fml will be yet so I can't really answer that question.
Blue_Pizza:Couple ship. Eg grumpy x sunshine
Blue_PizzaLv4
Noted, thx
Vainglory0:Well, the only thing that is confirmed is that this is a single fl novel. The author hates harem so it definitely won't be one. However, the author hasn't decided on who the fml will be yet so I can't really answer that question.
Sravan_PatriLv1
Has he decided :)
Vainglory0:Well, the only thing that is confirmed is that this is a single fl novel. The author hates harem so it definitely won't be one. However, the author hasn't decided on who the fml will be yet so I can't really answer that question.
Generic_007Lv4
he (?)
FailedWriter101:Thanks for the review, I will do my best to improve!
whaTLv14
I hate harem as well 🥱
FailedWriter101:Thanks for the review, I will do my best to improve!
Christian_LynchLv3
author who is the fl
FailedWriter101:Thanks for the review, I will do my best to improve!