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Rahul_Verma_9515Lv121mth
2024-12-30 06:28

Too much rubbish info. So wastage of time is one issue. But secondly, the story was good at start but the mc progression just went from extremely low to extremely high so fast that the rhythm of whole story was ruined. I feel very disappointed because of it. Thirdly after all this the mc is kind even though he says he is not but he sure acts like a saint (I dont know if I should be happy or sad for it) . Truely a miracle there. Lastly he is becoming a idiot as the story is progressing. I liked the story far better before that cat came into his life(unnecessary extra) . I am at 160 ch now. And I hope it will get better ahead.

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Rahul_Verma_9515Lv12

I think its not Mc but the story is becoming stupid. Seriously author ch 163 will you seriously die if your parents asked you to die because they will feel more stronger.

EldeelLv15

Tbh I would say the story is progressing quite well. If you read the authors previous works, in general he takes a very slow progression in his stories. His main goal is to make the characters feel alive and hence many time you will see filler chapters. But trust me in the end it all adds up. Also the author dosent care abt revenge anymore as much, his time under Gerald’s guidance helped him shed his desire for revenge. His main goal now is to protect Ellara as requested by Gerald. It also seems he is building his own story, from his information from the book. Also I don’t think the Mc ever acts dumb, he always follows a plan. In general you have to be very patient as a reader with Darkenss_Enjoyer books. This is coming from someone who sent frustrated messages so many times because I was not happy with the pace of the story. Think this book as a marathon not as a sprint to main key events.

EldeelLv15

Sry I meant Lucavion dosent care abt revenge anymore. My bad.

Eldeel:Tbh I would say the story is progressing quite well. If you read the authors previous works, in general he takes a very slow progression in his stories. His main goal is to make the characters feel alive and hence many time you will see filler chapters. But trust me in the end it all adds up. Also the author dosent care abt revenge anymore as much, his time under Gerald’s guidance helped him shed his desire for revenge. His main goal now is to protect Ellara as requested by Gerald. It also seems he is building his own story, from his information from the book. Also I don’t think the Mc ever acts dumb, he always follows a plan. In general you have to be very patient as a reader with Darkenss_Enjoyer books. This is coming from someone who sent frustrated messages so many times because I was not happy with the pace of the story. Think this book as a marathon not as a sprint to main key events.
Rahul_Verma_9515Lv12

Bro I tried to ignore your comment but just could not. Either you dont understand how real life works or you do not use logic. The story has become shit after the military arc. And even that Arc had many logical fault. Like why no one sided with any of both characters in this magical world . Second The story's character behaviour are not realistic. They are behaving to support the Mc's progression . Thirdly the author is trying to narrate it beautifully but what could be told in 1 paragraph is told in 1 chapter. No one has time or patience to read that shit. It was fine once or twice but every fucckking time its just irritating. You might have the patience to read 100s of chapter to reach conclusion but not others. Take the competition arc it went for like approx 100+ chapters seriously. What kind of rubbish is that. Every other novel will end it in 10-20 chapters and that to at most. Lastly the Mcs character is a idiot. He is a fucckking saint through and through. And His flirting just made me sick. It was nice once or twice but every time. This is not normal. You yourself go and flirt with girls and tell me if constant flirt will get you to the police or into her bed. I had high expectation from this novel at start but this is just a novel for Kids.

Eldeel:Tbh I would say the story is progressing quite well. If you read the authors previous works, in general he takes a very slow progression in his stories. His main goal is to make the characters feel alive and hence many time you will see filler chapters. But trust me in the end it all adds up. Also the author dosent care abt revenge anymore as much, his time under Gerald’s guidance helped him shed his desire for revenge. His main goal now is to protect Ellara as requested by Gerald. It also seems he is building his own story, from his information from the book. Also I don’t think the Mc ever acts dumb, he always follows a plan. In general you have to be very patient as a reader with Darkenss_Enjoyer books. This is coming from someone who sent frustrated messages so many times because I was not happy with the pace of the story. Think this book as a marathon not as a sprint to main key events.
EldeelLv15

Its ok, maybe this book is not for you. For you this might seem dumb, but for its peak reading experience. I used to hate writing style of the author but after forcing thru one of his books I have come to appreciate his craft. But it’s cool bro, you do you. Every one is entitled to their opinion.

Rahul_Verma_9515:Bro I tried to ignore your comment but just could not. Either you dont understand how real life works or you do not use logic. The story has become shit after the military arc. And even that Arc had many logical fault. Like why no one sided with any of both characters in this magical world . Second The story's character behaviour are not realistic. They are behaving to support the Mc's progression . Thirdly the author is trying to narrate it beautifully but what could be told in 1 paragraph is told in 1 chapter. No one has time or patience to read that shit. It was fine once or twice but every fucckking time its just irritating. You might have the patience to read 100s of chapter to reach conclusion but not others. Take the competition arc it went for like approx 100+ chapters seriously. What kind of rubbish is that. Every other novel will end it in 10-20 chapters and that to at most. Lastly the Mcs character is a idiot. He is a fucckking saint through and through. And His flirting just made me sick. It was nice once or twice but every time. This is not normal. You yourself go and flirt with girls and tell me if constant flirt will get you to the police or into her bed. I had high expectation from this novel at start but this is just a novel for Kids.
UknowmeLv14

🤣🤣🤣nice

Rahul_Verma_9515:Bro I tried to ignore your comment but just could not. Either you dont understand how real life works or you do not use logic. The story has become shit after the military arc. And even that Arc had many logical fault. Like why no one sided with any of both characters in this magical world . Second The story's character behaviour are not realistic. They are behaving to support the Mc's progression . Thirdly the author is trying to narrate it beautifully but what could be told in 1 paragraph is told in 1 chapter. No one has time or patience to read that shit. It was fine once or twice but every fucckking time its just irritating. You might have the patience to read 100s of chapter to reach conclusion but not others. Take the competition arc it went for like approx 100+ chapters seriously. What kind of rubbish is that. Every other novel will end it in 10-20 chapters and that to at most. Lastly the Mcs character is a idiot. He is a fucckking saint through and through. And His flirting just made me sick. It was nice once or twice but every time. This is not normal. You yourself go and flirt with girls and tell me if constant flirt will get you to the police or into her bed. I had high expectation from this novel at start but this is just a novel for Kids.
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