Rahul_Verma_9515

Kid its because you need maturity to understand what I said. 😏

He will make her suffer bro. Not forgive her.

The only thing I want to suggest the author is to not make this novel so lengthy. This will be this novels downfall and not any other logical mistakes he made in the novel. I have seen comments where the author keeps defending himself pointing others fault. I thing just accept it and move on and take it positively. I liked your novels, the concept and world building is very good. And well there will always be some logic error here and there in every novel so dont stress it. People can ignore these thing easily if they are small and move on but not if someone wastes their time with what they expect from something and are disappointed. See that every negative comment you got has one thing in common that the novel you are writing is stupidly lengthy. Lengthy in a sense the time is going at slow pace you are telling me every detail of every day like how he is breathing and all. And really I dont care coz its not helpful or useful for me to remember it or even waste my time reading it. Really but now i am giving up at nearly 400 ch with no improvement had much expectations.

Forgot to write this but what is wrong with your english. I am going crazy.

What kind of stupid ass character are you writing Author? The MC is so stupid that he needs nearly 2 months just to check his status screen and learn about his basic skills or anything basic while other with him already know much more. He does not even try to learn anything or ask anything from others. Extremely disappointing character development. Also his jokes were fine at first a little but but are so bad that my head started hurting reading him speak so stupidly constantly. Nothing he is talking or monologuing is useful. Just his stupidity shown to readers. Read till 50 ch but very disappointed. The concept of story is good and all but character development is shit. Story progression is all over the place no idea what is going on. MC is just a side character shown here and his age is changing from 17 in starting chapter to 16 later. Is he getting younger or what?

Well good for you that that book Harry Potter saved your life. But I feel sorry that you are such a simple person and dont realize it that some people just dont love feminist book. Just because you like this feminist shit does not mean everyone should like it and post nice comments. Try to learn to take a no for an answer as every other girl will tell you in your life and I think you will understand it due to being a femnist. And sorry to disappoint you humans are not simple people they are complex creatures. And dont compare your standard with others. You dont even know who you are talking to from other side of the screen.

The name of this novel should be "A Villain for HUMAN". The MC has some problem with humans and likes to eat them. It was fine for sometime but does now it feels forced. I dont understand how is this a better novel than other which have much better Villain character as I saw in some reviews. Secondly their are flaws in logic. Their is no explanation how he got a system. Secondly he trusts the system blindly where he needs to be having trust issues. The system has been humanized so it feels like he had a companion in it. There should not be any romance but he start having love trouble that too with a human girl who he talked for like 5 min even though he is a man eating and loving it monster. Thats just absolutely stupid. The MC should have been atleast a little mature he feels more like idiot and sometimes too smart for his age. Idiotic characters where some randome vampire falls for him head over heel. Random human girl feels like he is her way to success even though knowing he wants to eradicate the humans of this world. And worst of all that I dont like is that the author wanted to make a villain but he ended up making a man eating monster. Author I feel like you should refer some better novels where the MC is a villain like Reverend Insanity, Cursed Immortality, Greed: All for what?, WoTMW. These are my fav and many others. Your novel had potential at start and even had now but it feels like slipping away. I can read your novel for sometime but I might not be able to finish it as I did for the above novels. I have read till 300+ ch but not sure I can continue.

Everyone is the protagonist of their own story.

MC is childish. Novel is immature. Why summon children? Even if you do make them mature with time atleast.

Well cant change my review now but want to say I continued for some more chapters with all the positive reviews with some expectations. So the novel gets better after 400+ something chapters into it and I was able to complete it without my head hurting with his stupid logic. MC immaturity is removed slowly and he has got a goal. He learns and improves himself. And the novel becomes much better to read.