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TwinkieXO

TwinkieXO

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2019-01-17 JoinedUnited Arab Emirates
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO5h
    Replied to Resurgent

    I don’t know man. Asher surpasses expectations.

    He met Asher's eyes squarely, fatigue etched in the lines of his face, "I have employed every expert out there, and yet they only managed to make her condition worsen. For some reason, she wouldn't let anyone near her except me and would scream and fight back. That man you saw earlier is her fiance, and she still only acts somewhat familiar with him. Even then, he puts himself through this because he loves her and doesn't want to abandon her despite being told to move on. So I am not going to risk it again, especially not with your kingdom's people. I would rather see my granddaughter's happy smile once in a while rather than lose her forever."
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO5d
    Commented

    Yeah………..no

    "As a Support, you can provide support to any living being as long as it has life force or nature deems it as alive. You support the heavens and earth."
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    I Only Have Support Skills
    Urban · Lncea
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO8d
    Replied to Itzmeanurag

    You expect too much from this wuss

    'It's annoying. It's annoying. It's so annoying. Something about her is annoying me so much. Crap! Shit!'
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO8d
    Commented

    I ypthink it would be better for Asher to kill her than to tell her the truth.

    Ch 550 Lake Of No Return
    altalt
    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO8d
    Commented

    Amazing chapter as always.

    Ch 224 Race Start!(Part-4)
    altalt
    I Only Have Support Skills
    Urban · Lncea
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO9d
    Posted

    I once gave this book a 3.75 star review cause I believed it has potential but alas I decided to drop it finally. The book is definition of very good idea but trash level execution. The first 30 chapters are a torture to go through. It becomes good for the next 50 ish chapters and then goes back to being a bore and waste of time and money. Here are some of the main problems I have with this book: 1. Mc This guy is actually dumb. Mc’s motivation is to get motivation to get stronger. He will never make a decision that moves the story forward. The story progress depends completely on the world event and side characters. If noting happned the mc will just stand and wait for something to happen. If I told you that you would become stronger by killing monsters , What would you do? Someone with basic sense would say I will kill monsters to get stronger. But our mc will not kill monsters, he will go on a trip which involves no killing of monsters, and then ask “What can I do to become stronger, if I stay like this I will never catch up to my enemies? Also mc is definition of a tsundere he will argue with the female lead and still do what she wants. I just call him a dumb simp. Again if you want a mc with personality your out of luck, we just have the regular monologue mc cause making decisions is impossible. 2. Female lead I don’t know how I came to hate someone, who only speaks 3 times per chapter and smiles 5 times in every conversation. The author has a talent for making the most hatable characters. She is so hatable that I would rather drop the book than continue reading. 3. Side characters NPC’s with AI personalities like: wuss sidekick, grumpy instructor, rowdy bully, guy who got scared cause he saw how strong mc was and caring instructor mc had one interaction with. 4. Writing style: This is clearly the first book by the author, it follows basic anime tropes. The author purposely skips information cause he wants to surprise the readers later in the story(its not a surprise when we all know what to expect). An example of some amzing interactions you can expect: Person1: I am going to kill somone clearly stronger than me Mc: I see you are out of your mind, …..I quit ……..but I have no choice so I will follow you( btw mc has a choice but too dumb to notice this) Some internal monologues the mc has during this conversation. “How will she kill someone’s so strong?, but I wont ask her cause then she can ask something abt me.” My reaction Bitch you are going on this mission with her, you can ask about her plan in the last 10 chapters while you have been walking with her while having an internal monologue. On a side note just keep a dictionary near you cause author likes using words not used in the last century. 5. Talents What talents? There are gaps of 20 chapters or more where the mc has no battle(only way the mc gets stronger) and no one uses any abilities. Conclusion: Book is not worth reading,even though there are some unique ideas, better books exists with a similar trope and better in almost everything.

    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Replied to Abbys_Chronicle66

    Per chapter.

    They were still in the dry wood, standing opposite each other, Northern glaring and Raven smiling coldly.
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    I hope he dosent become a coward I really want him to get revenge

    After taking a deep, steadying breath, Asher managed to smile briefly at Arthur, "You are right. We owe her that and don't get me wrong, I truly want her to return to us. And I hope she will...before it's too late."
    altalt
    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Just use slip and boom, easy win

    Ch 222 Race Start!(Part-2)
    altalt
    I Only Have Support Skills
    Urban · Lncea
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Replied to TheSmartOne

    That was just bait. Most of the story he dosent even use his abilities anymore. Its just monotone talking and talking.

    'It's annoying. It's annoying. It's so annoying. Something about her is annoying me so much. Crap! Shit!'
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Replied to Eiseii36

    Smart decision. And sprint trust the author he wont grow smarter or stronger.

    Ch 181 Know Your Place... You Drifter
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    So why in a hurry to get a air ship?

    'It's not like I even care about all of that... I just want to get strong, go home and fucking kill Rughsbourgh.'
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    And being with her gives you motivation. Wow a simp and brainless

    He lacked passion.
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    So don’t go with her

    He had to grow... and become stronger.
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Yes you do.

    Northern shrugged, 'It's not like I have a choice anyway.'
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Please, please leave. This is just waste of time for everyone.

    "I thought you at least would have a semblance of common sense despite your stupidity. But maybe I was wrong to believe in you. If we can't see eye to eye on things, then maybe it's best for you to return to Lotheliwan, Northern."
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Wow bit calling the kettle black.

    "You're a naive fellow, very naive, Raven."
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Mc surprise count-3

    "What?"
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Replied to TwinkieXO

    2*

    Northern's mouth fell.
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • TwinkieXO
    TwinkieXO12d
    Commented

    Mc surprise count-1

    "You knew! You knew about the woods! You knew what it was going to do, and you knew that you were going to be heavily affected by it!!"
    altalt
    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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