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Dieudonner_17Lv56mth
2024-08-13 22:02

Writing quality is superb Updating stability nothing to say Story and character development. If there were tragedy and slow paced tags I won’t be frustrated 49 chapters in and mc is still canon fodder The frustration is just killing me Everyone seems to bully mc alone and despite his so called star devouring (spoiler) some rank 3 bozo is like heaven while he’s earth(apparently not as talented it’s made to be) If you like slow paced novels where mc is traumatized in more than 30 chapters while growing like a snail this book is for you

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Death_SoundsLv15

thanks for the warning, not interested in that

FenikeXLv14

me too

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jimmie_FourLv3

thanks for the warning

AuroraFlower30303Lv4

me too

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DJSANS_321Lv14

I should’ve looked at the comments first got 15 chapters in I couldn’t do it no more it was too slow paced, and the very beginning of the introductory chapter was completely unneeded. It just made it more frustrating to read.

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