Item: SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)
Rating: 3.2
Author: Zakino

ZakinoLv146mth

2024-07-17 22:02

Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.

SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

EmmaCruzader

4.7

40 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies7

EmmaCruzaderAuthor

You have to mark it as a spoiler, I don't mind criticism but I will delete any that give spoilers.

6mth

AngeltheweebLv3

Imagine complaining about mutants existing in marvel… thats like complaining that Kryptonians exist in DC. They are literally a part of that universe and getting rid of them is just dumb no matter the reason.

6mth

Dieudonner_17Lv5

He has a point though Title says mcu not just marvel He might be thinking marvel cinematic

Angeltheweeb:Imagine complaining about mutants existing in marvel… thats like complaining that Kryptonians exist in DC. They are literally a part of that universe and getting rid of them is just dumb no matter the reason.

6mth

RovontheusLv4

Introducing mutants doesn't work well cause of their absurd power with many rule breaking ability, MCU Avengers aren't ready to face mutants which is why most mutant+MCU FF sucks cause only a veteran author might be able to write a good story out of it.

Angeltheweeb:Imagine complaining about mutants existing in marvel… thats like complaining that Kryptonians exist in DC. They are literally a part of that universe and getting rid of them is just dumb no matter the reason.

5mth

R0BLv2

What??? You sir are clearly delusional.

EmmaCruzader:You have to mark it as a spoiler, I don't mind criticism but I will delete any that give spoilers.

5mth

EmmaCruzaderAuthor

Actually yes, a whole month and I completely forgot about this lol, at this point deleting it is irrelevant

R0B:What??? You sir are clearly delusional.

5mth

Man_of_culture_69Lv2

He is right.. mutants isn't in MCU if they were Thanos would have fled..

Angeltheweeb:Imagine complaining about mutants existing in marvel… thats like complaining that Kryptonians exist in DC. They are literally a part of that universe and getting rid of them is just dumb no matter the reason.

1mth

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EmmaCruzaderAuthor

Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D

5mth

LastGodLv5

so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.

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Darth_UllysesLv5

we need more.. but no rush keep up the good work

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Aayush_stormsLv4

please don't drop this it is the only good Captain America si on this whole app

8mth

1emanresULv1

Looks promising, it's well written, the story is developing in an interesting direction and even though the author calls the MC a self insert, instead of the usual personalityless blank sheet we have an actual character a personality. Looking forward to the next chapter.

8mth

YESandYESLv4

I think it's pretty good so far..........

8mth

SAURON_Lv2

booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum

6mth

GhostAKillaLv14

Will you have the radiation power ?Keep it up man

8mth

gutlessLv15

it's peak .

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