Idk what was that all about, but you are in the wrong here. By reading the comments it's basically confirmed that mc is a beta male steriotype. Just accept it and move on. Your character suck "boo woo", how about - do something about it, stop whining like a little bitch to people who point that out.

I don't understand, how did he open the ice and took all the treasure???

Tbh, this chap was quite stupid, I didn't like it :/

Writing quality - good enough 5/5 Updating stability - good enough 5/5 Story development - nothing interesting like ever happened, so 2/5 Character design - inconsistent 3/5 World background - the story revolves around author's created characters 2/5

Repeated chapter

Writing quality - needs a rewrite 1/5 Updating stability - hard to say, raletivly the updates are super slow now 3/5 Story development - I liked it 5/5 Character design - good 4/5 World background - good 4/5

It's a good fanfic: Writing quality - needs a rewrite 1/5 Updating stability - hard to tell for now 3/5 Story development - good 4/5 Character design - good 4/5 World background - good 4/5

Overated piece of dogshit. Writing quality - good 4/5 Updating stability - good 4/5 Story development - so for example spy x family - the story has nothing to do with spy x family characters, not to mention it sucks, because those characters don't really exist in the first place and they get reset after each death. The system sucks too (a lot of wtf moments with the system), just a wasted my time reading this to be honest - 2/5 for the effort I guess. Character design - basically almost all characters are created by the author and the story revolves around those characters. This is bad, because nobody cares or even should care about those characters 1/5 World background - obviously the story should be about it's world, but instead we get stories not related to the current world.... 1/5

I don't understand, why don't you share a patreon link, why are you so sneaky?

This is pure wish fulfilment with a lot of plotholes, even when mc doesn't do anything about specific problems, everything goes his way without even addresing them as a problem... His powers also don't make any sense, it exists purely out of convenient for the author .. the story is super bland, especially in GOT arc. Romance is not existant, just teenage harem interractions instead. I'm amazed I finished reading all current chapters.

Well at least mc had a toilet water... The smell must have woke him up...

That's not how potions work

Just realised a plot hole - the boy who lived (Neville) bought an own (hedwig), but didn't buy Harry's previous wand... So harry left his wand in the oliwander shop for no reason. I'm sure author will ignore this point, but still... Also - Hedwig was not special to begin with, there's no reason for harry not to buy a new owl.

I just don't understand, you said you are sorry, but you didn't remove the repeated chapters... You didn't fix anything at all - delete the repeating chapters not only here, but in other fics too!

FFAdddict has problems with repeating chapters...

Why not combine devil and angel energies to create niphilhelm~ (most likely wrote wrongly) energy in a potion that let's you adapt to the combined energy. His race will change to something else enterely with no weaknesses. Not sure about dragon energy tho, it might mutate him somehow, in that situation he might need to learn transformation magic dragons use to return to normal human appearance.

The story is good, but it's hard to read and names don't make any sense...

The story is missing some *spice*, you know.. It's preatty bland - no humor, steriotipical characters, no butterfly effect, mc thinks he IS Kaido personality wise, 1 hit 1 kill fights. This story is missing a hook that keeps the readers reading. For me tge more I read the harder it was to read the next chapter because nothing interesting happened. Everything is predictable, so there weren't a lot of surprises. Now the system - the system makes the story worse, because the main point of this fanfic was "what would you do if you were Kaido?", obviously the answer wouldn't be you would cheat with a system, right? That defeats the whole purpose of this fanfic idea wise.