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LastGod
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2024-07-08 21:36

so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.

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CrownClown666
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This is what I was on the fence about. It just doesn't seem like it needed a cross-over, especially with The Boys series. Marvel already has enough for fanfic writers to write a whole storyline, whether it's an OC or SI ,even mixing it up between the comics and cinematic universe. Idk, I'll give it a shot.

AleccrimD
AleccrimDLv4

So how was the experience, my friend. Is it worth it?

CrownClown666:This is what I was on the fence about. It just doesn't seem like it needed a cross-over, especially with The Boys series. Marvel already has enough for fanfic writers to write a whole storyline, whether it's an OC or SI ,even mixing it up between the comics and cinematic universe. Idk, I'll give it a shot.
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Physical_Smith
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honestly try it out its not what u think really I just left it to build chaps and its gotten nowhere in terms of the amount of chaps. but this fic was pretty great the last time I read it ot

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