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SAURON_Lv26mth
2024-07-10 03:45

booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum

SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

EmmaCruzader
4.7
40 Chs

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EmmaCruzader
EmmaCruzaderAuthor

Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D

5mth

LastGod
LastGodLv5

so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.

6mth
Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

we need more.. but no rush keep up the good work

8mth
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

please don't drop this it is the only good Captain America si on this whole app

8mth
1emanresU
1emanresULv1

Looks promising, it's well written, the story is developing in an interesting direction and even though the author calls the MC a self insert, instead of the usual personalityless blank sheet we have an actual character a personality. Looking forward to the next chapter.

8mth
YESandYES
YESandYESLv4

I think it's pretty good so far..........

8mth
Zakino
ZakinoLv14

Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.

6mth
GhostAKilla
GhostAKillaLv14

Will you have the radiation power ?Keep it up man

8mth
gutless
gutlessLv15

it's peak .

5mth
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