Item: The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
Rating: 2.6
Author: firat_Vural

firat_VuralLv137mth

2024-04-22 01:35

It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that

The Adeptus Custodes(DC)

A_Real_Werewolf234

4.6

60 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies13

A_Real_Werewolf234Author

He sucks though.

7mth

firat_VuralLv13

Sure buddy your opinion i respect it. But i am a fan of his that is why i couldn’t continue

A_Real_Werewolf234:He sucks though.

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A_Real_Werewolf234Author

firat_Vural:Sure buddy your opinion i respect it. But i am a fan of his that is why i couldn’t continue

6mth

firat_VuralLv13

Hmm an author that respects opinions on webnovel. Impossible. Joking aside good luck dude.

A_Real_Werewolf234:
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DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Imagine thinking Batman sucks lol

A_Real_Werewolf234:He sucks though.

6mth

A_Real_Werewolf234Author

I like Deathstroke better.

DaoistyQNGiX:Imagine thinking Batman sucks lol

6mth

StrikerGLv4

His no killing rule sucks.

DaoistyQNGiX:Imagine thinking Batman sucks lol

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PotatownedLv14

Is this a harem?

A_Real_Werewolf234:I like Deathstroke better.

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A_Real_Werewolf234Author

Yes

Potatowned:Is this a harem?

3mth

A_Real_Werewolf234Author

Always is

Potatowned:Is this a harem?

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JuhikoLv6

then always put the harem tag pls

A_Real_Werewolf234:Always is

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Jordzfml_7Lv3

A_Real_Werewolf234:He sucks though.

Jordzfml_7Lv3

I'm about to read your novel just because of this one sentence.

A_Real_Werewolf234:I like Deathstroke better.

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