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Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv111yr
2024-03-20 13:34

The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol

The Adeptus Custodes(DC)

A_Real_Werewolf234
4.5
80 Chs

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A_Real_Werewolf234
A_Real_Werewolf234Author

Sounds like projecting.

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Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv11

yes it seems

A_Real_Werewolf234:Sounds like projecting.
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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

Idk if hes “the worst kind of failure” but his character is definitely annoying as all h*ll. Then again im not a huge warhammer fan but if I remember right he acts pretty much how you’d expect him to for the “template” he chose. To me that doesn’t make it any less annoying, but most warhammer fans are loyalists of the Imperium of Man and they absolutely eat stuff like this up. So it’s just a preference thing for me.

1yr
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Zed1_Eren_
Zed1_Eren_Lv4

😂🤣😂🤣

11mth
EldritchProgenitor
EldritchProgenitorLv13

Are you going to betray humanity in the future? Burn traitor scum

Raptor2244:Idk if hes “the worst kind of failure” but his character is definitely annoying as all h*ll. Then again im not a huge warhammer fan but if I remember right he acts pretty much how you’d expect him to for the “template” he chose. To me that doesn’t make it any less annoying, but most warhammer fans are loyalists of the Imperium of Man and they absolutely eat stuff like this up. So it’s just a preference thing for me.
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Habutheri
HabutheriLv4

I have no desire to read this fanfic precisely because of the amount of idiots making reviews just to make Warhammer memes, thank you very much for commenting something informative.

10mth
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Habutheri
HabutheriLv4

You too, many thanks

Raptor2244:Idk if hes “the worst kind of failure” but his character is definitely annoying as all h*ll. Then again im not a huge warhammer fan but if I remember right he acts pretty much how you’d expect him to for the “template” he chose. To me that doesn’t make it any less annoying, but most warhammer fans are loyalists of the Imperium of Man and they absolutely eat stuff like this up. So it’s just a preference thing for me.
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DarkCustodes
DarkCustodesLv4

it's in the tags, i don't know what else you would expect.

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Gojou_Otsutsuki
Gojou_OtsutsukiLv3

this is sooo funnyyyy lmaoooo...i honestly was just skimming thru t story profile coz i know nothing abt Warhammer and Highschoolm DxD but now for some reason i wanna read this fic

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Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv11

good luck with that lol

Gojou_Otsutsuki:this is sooo funnyyyy lmaoooo...i honestly was just skimming thru t story profile coz i know nothing abt Warhammer and Highschoolm DxD but now for some reason i wanna read this fic
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