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pegasus_z013 hours agoReplied to Jaxon235I’m trying to write a story right now but i haven’t shared it because the writing isn’t very good.
- pegasus_z013 hours agoReplied to Jaxon235
Like the original author hasn’t included any stereotypes yet
- pegasus_z013 hours agoCommented
At least the author doesn’t mention “watermelon energy” or something
- pegasus_z013 hours agoCommented
Thats insane. And its actually well written too😭
- pegasus_z014 hours agoCommented
What? Thats crazy.
- pegasus_z09 days agoCommented
Im listening to this in text to speech and the ai read this as “jack democratic”
- pegasus_z014 days agoCommented
Ayo?
- pegasus_z022 days agoCommented
you are probably long gone by now but at least i tried: delete the novel. write the description again, without any words like w***e. remake the novel. its a lot of work, but its the surest path.
- pegasus_z0a month agoCommented
Author, i tried to join your discord, but it looks like the link is too old
- pegasus_z0a month agoPosted
I noticed your story does not have many ratings, so I wanted to give you some pointers on how to improve. For one, it's very clear english is not your first language, and you need to go back and edit your chapters. And second, try and read some other novels, like kill the sun or shadow slave, to see how novels on this site are normally written.