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You must be fun at parties, if you can't even differentiate between joke
questionable questing, a site for fics like ffnet or ao3
wow a very nice if saying nerf
yeah bro take author's even deeper
Read up till 11, dunno why it says 3.
Writing quality- 5 It reads easily and with very few errors. Story Development- 3 Despite the author's best efforts, the narrative still seems to be controlled rather than developing organically. Character Development- 4 Since I dropped this early, the story did not have time to develop, so this parameter should be moot. But the -1 is for his carelessness, which felt forced in order to show us Oozaru's form. He could have simply teleported with Kai Kai. Update schedule- 5 ??? It took me an hour to get to the place where I dropped, so I am not sure about the update schedule. So you have to find it yourself. Then why five stars? Because it is my fault, not the author's, that I did not know. World background- 5 Again, 5 because I dropped too soon while it was still in the setup stage. Now why did I drop- It is not because of any flaws in the story; rather, I did not like the direction it was taking. I dislike mentor/babysitting arcs, particularly when the MC is still four.
ugh it's one of those kinda story huh... fml
You are grasping at straws fam
So Goku will be born next year(735) in this story.
A normal human can survive upto 30 sec in vaccum without permanent damage and upto 90 seconds with recoverable damage. Enough to think about teleporting with KAI KAI. Also wishing for 'survival in vaccum' will only let him survive in vaccum and not death from sudden explosion.