The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)
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LIKEYes, the trend amongst writers on this platform is to compromise character and world integrity for a grand show of theatrics, like a character awakening power instantly or achieving a goal that would take years in a few chapters, simply for reader retention because readers these days hop out of a story if there isn’t a major event every few chapters.
Also for some reason he enjoys leaving his life in the hands of other people. I mean the system allows him to buy stuff why can't he buy something that can protect him
Devil_Immortal:This is a good technology based novel, but the growth of MC and his business is fast paced and he is jumping from energy sector to transport sector and then to pharmaceutical sector. He has no background on medicine how can others believe he is the inventor of said medicine.