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Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv49mth
2024-04-13 19:00

The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)

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novelmeister
novelmeisterLv15

Yes, the trend amongst writers on this platform is to compromise character and world integrity for a grand show of theatrics, like a character awakening power instantly or achieving a goal that would take years in a few chapters, simply for reader retention because readers these days hop out of a story if there isn’t a major event every few chapters.

emjason
emjasonLv4

Please which one is that? Been looking for a good technological novel lately? Can you recommend?

UniverseM007
UniverseM007Lv4

one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.

Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv4

I don't know, I didn't continue reading it

UniverseM007:one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.
Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv4

Scholar’s Advanced Technological System

emjason:Please which one is that? Been looking for a good technological novel lately? Can you recommend?
Devil_Immortal
Devil_ImmortalLv4

This is a good technology based novel, but the growth of MC and his business is fast paced and he is jumping from energy sector to transport sector and then to pharmaceutical sector. He has no background on medicine how can others believe he is the inventor of said medicine.

Admirers_Quill
Admirers_QuillLv4

scholar's advanced Technological system. it's the best one out there. and also Release that Witch.

emjason:Please which one is that? Been looking for a good technological novel lately? Can you recommend?
Golden_Wolf_
Golden_Wolf_Lv13

Also for some reason he enjoys leaving his life in the hands of other people. I mean the system allows him to buy stuff why can't he buy something that can protect him

Devil_Immortal:This is a good technology based novel, but the growth of MC and his business is fast paced and he is jumping from energy sector to transport sector and then to pharmaceutical sector. He has no background on medicine how can others believe he is the inventor of said medicine.
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DarkFight3r
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Horizon
HorizonLv13

Read up to ch 78 and this will be a blunt review. This story is obviously inspired by the “Scholar’s Advanced Technological System.” However the difference in quality and understanding of why that story succeeds is not the same. A major issue in this tech type stories is that the author can easily be bogged down writing jargon or a lot of inessential details that do not move the story forward and just make you scroll through the chapter because as a reader you know it’s not important. This is a failure in any book in my opinion. Readers should not feel that they are reading filler and that their time is wasted reading. However, I felt that way so many times reading this story. There were chapters where more than half of it was wasted on a list of inconsequential information that would not even matter one chapter over. The reason SATS succeeded is because the author understood how to temper the info dumps, in that story they are reserved only for techno jargon where there is some competition or tension in the story, making you be invested in the jargon, even if all of it did not make sense to a normal person. Here is just wasted on the specs of a truck, properties, or employee listings. Now onto the story aspects. The system and its inception is super cookie cutter, some generic Goddess™️ finds pity on this generic dude is “struggling oh so much” with the most generic issues. Honestly, the background of the main character would not be that important if it wasn’t so bland. Now the story progress is suffering from the same issue of the info dumps, bogged down by inconsequential content. Oh he has to file for business permits, oh he has to spend four chapters buying a truck to stroke his bruised ego because some guy looked at him funny, oh he has to spend multiple chapters getting a drivers license. It’s all just so banal and honestly not interesting to read. Which is the worst thing a book can do, bore you. Which is funny considering the most interesting part of this novel are the two female side characters who are investors in his business. They are interesting. I feel like the story would be so much better if a lot of the “filler” is cut down and the author focuses on moving the story forward instead of meandering on the most mundane aspects of the story.

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