Hey Peter, gonna be catching up on the chapters I missed. Havent read your content in a week or so[img=like]

Author has a bad habit of starting great series and proceeds to ruin them, then doesn’t know how to fix the problem, so he just starts a new novel instead. I wouldn’t recommend reading this knowing the author.

Can’t access the next 5 chapters, fix it thanks

They yearn for the mines

What’s up with you wanting these store workers to assault a kid for extra revenue? Kinda perverted author tbh

I would, but I own my own business and manage dozens of people. It doesn’t make sense for me to spend time writing novels when I wouldn’t be able to keep up with the demand of readers.

Of course. I have a quest for you now, if you want to receive another magic castle. Task: At some point in the story, it doesn’t matter when, have the MC lure a high noble who disrespected MC for being a commoner to a dark and secluded area to terrorize him and eventually put him under a sleeping spell, taking his body as a model, but not killing him. Then, as the MC uses the nobleman’s body, have him commit obscene acts of terror as the nobleman like blowing up the academy, kidnapping women, running around the academy naked, and when academy professors come to approach him to arrest him and arraign him for his crimes, have the mc switch to his regular school body then when the professors show up, have mc say he saw “high noble person” commit all of these crimes, corroborated by other student testimonies, essentially framing him for committing all of this terror in the academy. When the noble comes-to after being asleep, the professors find him, arrest him, and then expel and send him back to his household, where his parents disown him. There should be a few chapters of the noblemans POV of him getting disowned, just for the laughs, and a chapter or two of him eventually getting killed by something inconsequential like a rock thrown by a kid in the street. Overall, using this idea in your story will make the MC seem very sadistical. There is no reason you shouldn’t add this into the plot.

Incredible concept, excellent writing. There are few grammatical errors here and there, but ultimately, they do not disillusion you from the story. I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys villain characters and wants a unique twist on your traditional villain. Overall rating: 10/10

W Terrorism! 😍🤓🥳

You missed a huge opportunity to put ads in the music player that advertised products like “Get the all-new NcRib just $3.99 at your local NicBonalds!” or “Need a break from the ads? Spend 3,000 TP!”

Well… I can infer where this is going. “Inspire terror within an academy…” Seems like the author took inspiration from the United States

Author I will give gachapon if you publish 3 chapters a day for the next 2 weeks. To confirm quest please publish 3 tomorrow. 😊

SSS-class concept, F-class writing quality. That’s about all there is to this. If you can handle bad writing then you’ll like it.

Cool concept, but I’d drop the story altogether and try something else unless you already invested a lot into it. Just my opinion

Quest Introduce a character who transmigratesd from earth. Reward: Varies based on detail.

This story has absolutely horrible writing. I’ve been reading the chapters thinking it will get better soon, but no. Left and right there are S-SSS class people and the author thinks of them as normal folk. There is absolutely no plot in this other than the mc obtaining power, and it’s annoying.

Isn’t 16,000 stones way too much considering fatty didn’t even make that much while betting 1:5 at the arena

Also great job with the quest so far very extensive and worthy of the gachapon 👍

The four new chapters cannot be accessed. Please fix thanks

In any progression fantasy novel, there needs to be some adversity or controversy to draw readers in. This is likely why it doesn’t seem a nobleman is treated like one in a novel.